“If at First You Don’t Succeed…” #Comic part 7 (finale)
Lorraine might not have even mentioned all of the teams she auditioned for but Chariots of Colors and The Awks were two of them because two of the companies that Hi-Toro tried to sell the Amiga to were Apple and Silicon Graphics. I linked a source about that in the wiki article:
📄 https://operatingsuperstars.miraheze.org/wiki/If_at_First_You_Don't_Succeed
Her narration was going to be straightforward in the original script, but I changed it to her playing a song. It was fun to throw in 80’s glam rock visuals, and show off one of her music instruments. This part established that she has a talent for improvised musicals.
I’m glad to have finished this comic! It was a long detour from the other stories, and took longer than I hoped it would, but it was fun. There are still some leftover ideas for character interactions I might put into a written epilogue, but otherwise this story is completed 🎉
In preparation for this final part, I made this page on my Neocities site so I could clean up the story chapters page, and have all parts in one place:
📄 https://synergyeclipse30.neocities.org/operating-superstars/stories/IaFYDS
On the site, each of them can be viewed at once but the images are scaled down. The full-size images can be viewed on the wiki, one at a time.
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