VissI'm putting together a 1-pager for Phobos Groups offerings this year. Any designers want to fling critiques at it?
Jason Lefkowitz@Viss Two minor suggestions:
1) Bump up the internal padding on the rectangles containing text. Give the text inside some breathing room, don't want it bumping up against the wall of the container
2) Drop the bullets on the top-level items in each container. Bullets are only helpful if they're attached to a list; just one item doesn't need them. The containers do a good enough job of separating out the different groups by themselves
a high doom@Viss upper right quad, highlight the “sign up for a demo” call? Color or sommat. Or dont. Its great.
@Viss thats the stuff.
Fritz Adalis@Viss
The boxes aren't the same width, which makes me twitchy. Maybe make them all the same width and the top top and bottom bottom line up.
Typo in last word: available
Empty bullets are hard to see
Maybe move orbital signup url into the box?
Move "sign up for a free demo" either down a line or left
Somebody is going to whine about the http url
Maybe for the first three boxes center/bold/bigger the title and remove one level of bullets
This will be expensive to print on an inkjet.
@FritzAdalis this is just a pdf thats going to linkedin, nobody is going to print it. the target audience for this thing is largely folks on linkedin and leadership types that in very large part arent technical and likely will not look at this thing that hard
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darf 
@Viss not a designer, but adding a thin black border to the text will likely make it way easier to read on a multi-color'd background.
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@darfplatypus @Viss Impact font.
Okay, ignore me. I'm no help.
@darfplatypus @Viss Dammit now I have to look.
@darfplatypus what about adding a gray fade to the text boxes with a light opacity?
Phogna Bologna@Viss @darfplatypus this is what I was thinking, but only to the text blocks at the bottom right (which may be what you meant)
Solo la 🌍 salva a la 🌎Not a designer. Trying to suss out the pricing. And also: that's a page o' text, which is probably the intent.
The pricing block in the upper-right section is for Orbital tool? Can it be boiled down?
And the rates and etc at the bottom are for human assessment / advisory services? Can they be pulled up to be in the assessment / advisory "block"?
I really like the text description of Orbital, but it doesn't fit with the bullet-point layout of the rest.