I'm putting together a 1-pager for Phobos Groups offerings this year. Any designers want to fling critiques at it?

@Viss

Not a designer. Trying to suss out the pricing. And also: that's a page o' text, which is probably the intent.

The pricing block in the upper-right section is for Orbital tool? Can it be boiled down?

And the rates and etc at the bottom are for human assessment / advisory services? Can they be pulled up to be in the assessment / advisory "block"?

I really like the text description of Orbital, but it doesn't fit with the bullet-point layout of the rest.