Free Workshop: How to Write Fear That Feels Real

Writing authentic fear reactions can be challenging—even when we understand our character well. Why? Because each character has their own personality, background, trauma, and triggers, meaning their fear response to perceived threats will be unique. Showing our character’s fear-driven behavior, choices, and perceptions is a skill worth mastering because fear is a powerful common ground...
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Free Workshop: How to Write Fear That Feels Real

Join writing experts Becca Puglisi & Angela Ackerman for a free writing workshop that dives into how to write authentic fear responses!

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Why India Will Not Overtake China

There is a thought I have been sitting with for a while, and I want to put it out without dressing it up.

India is not going to overtake China. People hate hearing this. They will quote our GDP growth, our young population, our rising number of unicorns, the size of our talent pool. None of that is the real story. The real story is harder to fix because it does not sit inside policy or money. It sits inside the way Indians treat each other.

India is a low trust society trying to behave like a high trust one. Until that gap closes, real scale will keep slipping out of our hands.

I know this sounds like opinion, so let me show you the research, because the work on this question is actually quite settled.

In 1997, two economists named Stephen Knack and Philip Keefer published a paper in the Quarterly Journal of Economics. They studied 29 countries and found a clear link between how much people in a country trust strangers and how well that country performs economically. More trust meant stronger growth, better institutions and lower corruption. They never claimed trust was the only thing that mattered. But they showed it mattered a lot. That paper is now one of the most cited works in development economics.

Around the same time, the political thinker Francis Fukuyama wrote a full book called Trust. His argument was simple. Countries that build large, well run institutions almost always sit on top of high social trust. When trust is missing, what you usually see is small family run businesses that struggle to grow past one or two generations.

When you actually look at the numbers, the gap between countries is huge. The Integrated Values Surveys, which collect this data through 2022, show that around seventy four percent of people in Denmark say most people can be trusted. Norway is at about seventy two. Finland at sixty eight. China comes in fourth in the world at around sixty three percent. It is the only country outside the West in the top group. India does not appear anywhere near these numbers. Researchers from IZA and other peer reviewed journals openly call India a low trust country, often using exactly that phrase in the very first line of their paper.

Corruption follows the same pattern, because trust and corruption are basically two sides of the same coin. In Transparency International’s 2024 Corruption Perceptions Index, India is ranked 96 out of 180 countries, with a score of 38 out of 100. China sits at 76. Denmark, Finland and Singapore are at the very top. These rankings are not random. The same countries that score high on trust also score low on corruption. Both numbers come from the same habit, the habit of strangers behaving honestly even when no one is watching them.

The Indian version of this problem actually has a name in academic literature. We have just not started using it.

In 1958, an American political scientist called Edward Banfield went to live for nine months in a poor village in southern Italy called Chiaromonte. He was trying to understand why the village stayed poor for generations even though the people there were perfectly capable. The book he wrote afterwards, The Moral Basis of a Backward Society, gave us a concept called amoral familism. Banfield described it as a community where everyone tries to maximize benefits for their own immediate family, and assumes everyone else is doing the same. The result was a village that could not act together for any common goal. Nobody trusted their neighbours or the institutions around them. Anything outside the household was treated as either a threat or something to quietly take from. Years later, the political scientist Robert Putnam expanded this work across all of Italy and showed that the more trusting north of Italy consistently performed better than the south on almost every measure of governance and prosperity.

Read Banfield’s description today, replace the word village with India, and the fit is uncomfortably close.

We trust our family fully. We trust our caste, region and community a little. Beyond that small circle, we are always on guard. We feel that someone is trying to use us, replace us, take credit for our work, or take our seat the moment we stand up. And the painful part is that this fear is not really paranoia. It is mostly an honest reading of how things work around us. So people protect themselves first, and stop sharing what they know. When a billion people behave this way every day, the loss to the country is huge, even if no one can see it directly.

You can feel this in daily Indian life. The senior who refuses to truly invest in juniors, because a junior who grows is a junior who might one day take their place. The manager who hides information from the team, because letting them learn feels like a personal risk. The bureaucrat who refuses to move a file unless something is in it for him. The politician who treats public money like personal property. The friend quietly happy when you slow down, because your stagnation makes their position look stronger. The cousin who quietly damages the family business from inside, because grabbing a small piece feels safer than working together to grow the whole.

This is what failure to coordinate looks like at the level of a country.

China is not a clean society. Anyone who follows even basic Chinese politics knows the place has heavy corruption. The Xi government has been running an anti corruption campaign for over ten years and has prosecuted more than a million officials. The political system itself is closed, full of internal rivalry and favouritism. Yet despite all of that, China still manages to execute at a scale we cannot match. They built one of the largest fast rail networks in the world in around two decades. They built industries that made them the world leader in solar panels, electric vehicles, lithium batteries and now AI hardware. Their Belt and Road projects now reach more than a hundred countries. You can disagree with their political system, but the execution is real and visible.

India has stronger democratic freedoms and arguably better human capital. Yet we keep failing to turn these advantages into coordinated national outcomes. The bottleneck is not intelligence. It is the ability to coordinate. And the ability to coordinate, when you really break it down, is just trust wearing institutional clothes.

The Nordic countries make this point even more clearly.

Denmark, Sweden, Norway, Finland and Iceland together have a population smaller than greater Mumbai. Apart from Norway’s oil, they have almost no natural resources. They are cold, sparsely populated and were historically poor. And yet today they sit at the top of almost every global ranking that matters in the modern world. Innovation. Healthcare. Governance. Ease of doing business. Life expectancy. Happiness.

The OECD and the World Happiness Report keep pointing to one main reason. Their generalized trust is extremely high. Citizens trust each other and trust their institutions. So contracts work. Taxes actually reach the people they were meant for. Rules get followed even without surveillance. Society does not get jammed by its own friction. Their citizens are not smarter than ours. Their cooperation between strangers is just much denser.

Researchers describe two kinds of trust. Particularized trust is what you give to people you already know. Generalized trust is what you extend to strangers. India is rich in the first and very poor in the second. This one gap explains the strange paradox we live in every day. We send world class individuals to top companies and boardrooms abroad, while our own institutions back home keep struggling. The individual rises because the family invested in that one person. The system stays broken because almost nobody truly invests in the system.

I want to be careful here, because this argument is easy to misread.

I am not saying Indians are bad people. That framing is lazy and wrong. The argument is about the cultural operating system we have inherited. That operating system was shaped over centuries of foreign rule, scarcity and a long history where trusting outsiders often ended badly for the trusting side. Once upon a time, this software helped us survive. The price we pay for it today is that we cannot bring our brilliance together the way countries with stronger social capital can. A billion careful, guarded individuals do not add up to a coordinated nation. They cancel each other out at the edges, and the noise becomes louder than the progress.

If India ever truly wants to challenge China, the real work has to go much deeper than infrastructure spending or new policies. The real work is internal. It is about widening the trust circle outward from family to strangers. It is about senior people mentoring others without fearing being overtaken. It is about backing talent that does not share our caste, our region or our background. It is about believing that the collective will eventually protect us, and then actually showing up for someone else when their moment comes.

Until that quiet inner shift happens, India will keep producing brilliant individuals who win alone, while the operating system underneath us keeps failing as a whole. And that, more than any economic chart anyone can show me, is the real reason the China gap is going to stay wider than we are willing to admit.

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FEAR (USA) & Lothario @ The Tote 18+

The Tote, Friday, July 3 at 08:00 PM GMT+10

For the first time ever, American punk pioneers FEAR are heading to Australia this June and July, bringing nearly five decades of volume, controversy and pure attitude to stages across the country.

Formed in Los Angeles in 1978, FEAR didn’t just help shape punk rock - they defined its confrontational spirit. In 1981, the band made history as the first punk act to appear on national television in North America with their infamous Halloween performance on Saturday Night Live, courtesy of John Belushi. The chaotic set left the studio in shambles, landed the band on a permanent ban list, and was later ranked the #1 musical performance in the show’s history by Rolling Stone.

Their landmark debut album has sold over 500,000 copies and is widely regarded as one of the ten greatest punk records of all time.

Frontman Lee Ving has also carved out an acclaimed acting career, with appearances in Flashdance, Clue, Streets of Fire and more than 30 other film and television productions. Ving is also a key member of Sound City Players, appearing in the 2013 documentary and accompanying soundtrack project led by Dave Grohl.

After 40+ years of influence, chaos and cultural impact, Australian audiences will finally experience FEAR live for the very first time.

https://melbourne.askapunk.net/event/fear-usa-and-lothario-the-tote-18

FEAR (USA) & Handgrenade Hearts

The Tote, Thursday, July 2 at 08:00 PM GMT+10

For the first time ever, American punk pioneers FEAR are heading to Australia this June and July, bringing nearly five decades of volume, controversy and pure attitude to stages across the country.

Formed in Los Angeles in 1978, FEAR didn’t just help shape punk rock - they defined its confrontational spirit. In 1981, the band made history as the first punk act to appear on national television in North America with their infamous Halloween performance on Saturday Night Live, courtesy of John Belushi. The chaotic set left the studio in shambles, landed the band on a permanent ban list, and was later ranked the #1 musical performance in the show’s history by Rolling Stone.

Their landmark debut album has sold over 500,000 copies and is widely regarded as one of the ten greatest punk records of all time.

Frontman Lee Ving has also carved out an acclaimed acting career, with appearances in Flashdance, Clue, Streets of Fire and more than 30 other film and television productions. Ving is also a key member of Sound City Players, appearing in the 2013 documentary and accompanying soundtrack project led by Dave Grohl.

After 40+ years of influence, chaos and cultural impact, Australian audiences will finally experience FEAR live for the very first time.

https://melbourne.askapunk.net/event/fear-usa-and-handgrenade-hearts

5 Techniques for Showing a Character’s Suppressed Emotion

Today’s guest post is by Becca Puglisi. Character emotion, when written well, links directly to reader empathy. Why? Because when...
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5 Techniques for Showing a Character’s Suppressed Emotion

Explore how characters express emotions to connect with readers. Uncover the importance of authentic feeling in storytelling.

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the adhd is already losing interest in this

the audhd wonders if i would be expected to use metre


#fear.

Salisbury Cathedral
Oh yes, I really had to work hard to earn this ‘medal’!

The Tower Tour of Salisbury Cathedral’s tower isn’t for people with a fear of heights, like me – but it’s absolutely worth it!
And to be honest: you never talk about #fear – only about #heroic deeds! ;-)

May 2018

#Salisbury #SalisburyCathedral #England #Wiltshire #UK #GB #GothicArchitecture #TowerTour #Gothic #monochrome #blackandwhite #photography #church #Gotik #monochrom #SchwarzWeiss #Fotografie #Kirche

🤗☁️🌈☁️🕊️🌊⛴️🕊️🌊⛴️🕊️🌊⛴️✝️🫂🏩💒🛐👑🕊️💦❤️‍🔥💛🤗*God Has Done Great Things!🤗🕊️🌊⛴️🕊️🌊⛴️🕊️🌊⛴️☁️🌈☁️✝️🫂🏩💒🛐👑🕊️💦❤️‍🔥💛🤗

🤗☁️🌈☁️🕊️🌊⛴️✝️🫂🏩💒🛐👑🕊️💦❤️‍🔥💛🤗*Fear Not!*for I Am with You!🤗🕊️🌊⛴️☁️🌈☁️✝️🫂🏩💒🛐👑🕊️💦❤️‍🔥💛🤗

🤗☁️🌈☁️🕊️🌊⛴️🕊️🌊⛴️✝️🫂🏩💒🛐👑🕊️💦❤️‍🔥🕊️🌊⛴️🤗*fear not!*for I am with you!*be not dismayed!*for I am your God!*I will strengthen you!*I will help you!*I will uphold you with my righteous right hand!🤗🕊️🌊⛴️☁️🌈☁️✝️🫂🏩💒🛐👑🕊️💦❤️‍🔥💛🤗

(Isaiah 41:10)

#God #Has #Done #Great #Things #Saints #Fear #Not #for #I #Am #with #You #Lord #GOD #Christ #Jesus #Holy #Spirit #Pray #Hope #Love

🤗☁️🌈☁️🦉🦉🦉🌼💮❇️🏵️🌸💜💚🩷🩵❤️✝️🫂🏩💒🛐👑🕊️💦❤️‍🔥💛🤗*God Has Done Great Things!🤗🦉🦉🦉🦉💮❇️🏵️🌸💜💚🩷🩵❤️☁️🌈☁️✝️🫂🏩💒🛐👑🕊️💦❤️‍🔥💛🤗

🤗☁️🌈☁️🦉🌼💮❇️🏵️🌸💙🤎💜💚🩷🩵❤️✝️🫂🏩💒🛐👑🕊️💦❤️‍🔥💛🤗*Fear Not!*for I Am with You!🤗🦉🌼💮❇️🏵️🌸💜💚🩷🩵❤️☁️🌈☁️✝️🫂🏩💒🛐👑🕊️💦❤️‍🔥💛🤗

🤗☁️🌈☁️🦉🦉🦉🌼💮❇️🏵️🌸💜💚🩷🩵❤️✝️🫂🏩💒🛐👑🕊️💦❤️‍🔥💛🤗*fear not!*for I am with you!*be not dismayed!*for I am your God!*I will strengthen you!*I will help you!*I will uphold you with my righteous right hand!🤗🦉🦉🦉🌼💮❇️🏵️🌸💜💚🩷🩵❤️☁️🌈☁️✝️🫂🏩💒🛐👑🕊️💦❤️‍🔥💛🤗
(Isaiah 41:10)

#God #Has #Done #Great #Things #Fear #Not #for #I #Am #with #U #Christ #Jesus #Holy #Spirit #Love

*~*God Has Done Great Things!*~*

*~*Fear Not!*for I Am with You!*~*

*~*fear not!*for I am with you!*be not dismayed!*for I am your God!*I will strengthen you!*I will help you!*I will uphold you with my righteous right hand!*~*

(Isaiah 41:10)

#God #Has #Done #Great #Things #World #Saints #Fear #Not #for #I #Am #with #You #Lord #GOD #Christ #Jesus #Holy #Spirit #Pray #Hope #Believe #Love #Peace