RS, Author, Novelist, Prosaist#WordWeavers 2025.06.04 — Describe the mood of the opening paragraph of your story using 3 adjectives.
Intense, bloody, infuriating.
Because of feedback from the beta readers, this prompt is both a timely and useful exercise. I may have to add it to my bag of tricks for during revision. What was in my mind included angry and outraged, but rereading the paragraph, the MC strikes me as detached. I might even characterize it as her acting like a superhero. I need to fix that for the v3 beta reader…
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