#PennedPossibilities 334 — How does your MC handle sadness and depression?
Randall isn't very good at handling the negative emotions. As someone who suffers from a terrible case of Obsessive-Compulsive Disorder and is on the spectrum, he has a tough time with these emotions. In the past, he has had massive mental breakdowns where he'll tear everything to pieces. It shows how his world is crumbling as much on the outside as it is inwardly as well. It's heartbreakingly poetic.
#PennedPossibilities 334 — How does your MC handle sadness and depression?
Not very well. Ludwig struggled with emotions. He had a fiery temper, was well known for bouts of depression and rage, and it's now known (all these years on) that lead poisoning accounted for his memory lapses, temper, mood swings, clumsiness, and depressive episodes. It altered him in so many ways. Sadness and depression were not handled very well. He was a mess at times, inwardly and outwardly.
#PennedPossibilities 335 — Do you use metaphors in your writing? What are some examples?
Credit: @NaraMoore
I use all sorts of metaphors. I always have. I love adding in implied metaphors as well, so here's an example: "Her smile lit up the room." (Her smile was as bright as the sun.)
I found helpful articles for everyone. They're listed down below.
https://www.masterclass.com/articles/metaphor-examples-from-literature-and-everyday-speech
#PennedPossibilities 336 — Would you or have you ever used a mixed metaphor in your writing? We would love to hear some examples.
Credit: @NaraMoore
Yes, and to create a mixed metaphor, simply cut and paste sections of two incompatible metaphors.
Here's an example: "This is hardly rocket surgery."
I found some good articles for everyone to read. They're down below.
https://www.thoughtco.com/what-are-mixed-metaphors-1691770
https://www.masterclass.com/articles/mixed-metaphor
https://www.writingclasses.com/toolbox/ask-writer/what-is-a-mixed-metaphor
#PennedPossibilities 337 — What was the worst job that your MC or SC ever had?
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For Lix, it would have been twenty-five years prior working as an assistant to photographers before she could "prove" herself in the field. The thing was, they fully expected her to quit, give up, and go back home to work a "regular desk job" and all that rot. For the time period, women didn't do those jobs. Journalism was and is a male-dominated field. FYI, it's now 1958.
#PennedPossibilities 338 — How would your MC or SC respond to someone betraying their trust?
Not very well. The characters in this story run a television news program, the first of its kind, for the BBC. Let's take Randall, for instance. As Head of News, as a lifelong journalist and war photographer, he knows /just how/ to ruin someone's life if he ever needs to. Never cross a man like him, or anyone else on the team. Betrayal in their field of work would be a career end.
#PennedPossibilities 339 — Does your MC learn from their past, or are they prone to repeating the same mistakes?
Both Lix and Randall have been through hell together. They don't want to repeat their shared past. They were together, a whirlwind relationship, in the middle of a warzone. Things were bound to end. And oh, they did. They went down in a blaze that wasn't so glorious. They've both learned from the past and they treat one another with care now, twenty years later.
#PennedPossibilities 339 — Does your MC learn from their past, or are they prone to repeating the same mistakes?
Ludwig is constantly repeating his many blundering errors, despite knowing better from the start. He's so scathing of others who make the same mistakes. He's over-emotional, struggles with never-ending illness, and has a tendency to bicker back-and-forth with patrons (all whilst hoping for a different outcome that will never come). He should know better by now.
#PennedPossibilities 340 — How does your MC or SC feel about love as a concept?
It's real. Randall and Lix both WANT love, even if they don't think that they're deserving of it. Randall feels lucky to have found it once before in his life. Here it is and it's right in front of him like a second miracle. The proof is all there, and he needs only to accept it. Lix wants it again, is willing to wait for Randall like she did twenty years ago, and her heart aches for him.
#PennedPossibilities 340 — How does your MC or SC feel about love as a concept?
Ludwig always wanted love. He needed a wife, someone to care for him and to settle down with, but it never came his way. When he finally found a woman to fall head over heels for, it just so happened that said woman was already married to a terrible bastard. Nevertheless, they wound up having an affair. Love is real, it's precious and worth fighting for, and they're clinging so tightly to it.
#PennedPossibilities 341 — What are some of your SC's other (lesser) fears?
There's no need to make a long post about this one. Bel is terrified of balloons. Balloons mean clowns. Sometimes. Usually. Needless to say, she isn't a fan of them. They're too creepy.
#PennedPossibilities 342 — Does your MC actively seek romantic companionship, or cherish the liberties of being single?
Randall has never looked for romantic companionship. Instead, it found him. Lix pursued him. Claire pursued him while in France as well. Lix has, yet again, returned to him. She loves him, and he loves her. It's a story as old as time. They have loved one another for over twenty years, even though they were apart for about nineteen of them.
#PennedPossibilities 342 — Does your MC actively seek romantic companionship, or cherish the liberties of being single?
Ludwig wants to be married. Noble women of status said no to him every single time. Instead, he chose to seduce students and various other women. He craved intimacy and closeness, but he /wanted/ marriage. Seeing as it never seemed to be an option for him, he instead chose sex and satisfaction with women (and men). Now, however, he has a true partner.
#PennedPossibilities 343 — How does your MC feel about their appearance? Would they change anything about it? Would they change anything about their personality as well?
Randall would change a lot about himself, if he could. It takes some time for him to understand this, but Lix loves him EXACTLY as he is. She loves his quirks (OCD), cares for him through his breakdowns, adores his body, graying hair, the wrinkles that have come with age, and who he is as a person. Real love.
#PennedPossibilities 343 — How does your MC feel about their appearance? Would they change anything about it? Would they change anything about their personality as well? (1/2)
Sometimes, Ludwig wishes he was a different person. He can be abrasive and nasty. His personality is one that isn't quite for everyone. His appearance isn't the best (and that's for the time). As muscular as he is, he's shorter and has a pockmarked face. Some still deem him handsome, though. ~ (cont.)
#PennedPossibilities 343 — How does your MC feel about their appearance? Would they change anything about it? Would they change anything about their personality as well? (2/2)
(cont.) ~ He isn't an ugly man. Tall and skinny was the look for that time period. He would change so much about himself. His personality, his looks, his moods and clumsiness. (All these years on, we know this was all caused by lead poisoning. It wasn't enough to kill Beethoven, only change him.)
#PennedPossibilities 344 — Is your SC possessive over people or things that matter a lot to them? How do they express that possessiveness, or lack thereof?
Bel is possessive (or rather, PROTECTIVE) over the PEOPLE that matter to her. In the business of journalism, she has experienced loss and near-loss, and the ruination of careers as well. She's seen it all. She very nearly lost her husband, Freddie, to a beating. Bad things can happen. She protects them all closely now.
#PennedPossibilities 345 — How does your MC respond to silence? Do they take comfort in soundlessness, or seek to fill the void with noise?
Randall loves the peace and tranquility that comes with the sound of silence. It allows him to breathe, relax, and to finally hear his own thoughts. That being said, because of how he is, being on the spectrum and also having OCD, silence can sometimes be his undoing or downfall, and he'll NEED distractions. It goes both ways for him.
#PennedPossibilities 346 — Which of the four seasons suits your villain best, and why?
In a very poetic sense, if he WAS a season, it would be winter. Everything is cold, desolate, and dead. It suits him best.
Now, on the subject of which season he actually /likes/ the most, it would have to be springtime. Spain has incredibly hot weather. He hates when it's humid and scalding hot outside.
#PennedPossibilities 347 — Are there any special talents or skills that your MC or SC might have?
Fun fact: Lix Storm was and still very much is incredibly skilled when it comes to the art of espionage. She's talented at obtaining whatever information is needed, either pertaining to the military or political figures. I talk about it in my stories every so often.
#PennedPossibilities 348 — Where does your SC draw inspiration in life? What motivates them?
Bel wants to change the world. She draws inspiration from the strong, independent women around her. They're changing the world one (news) story at a time. Journalism, television, and the views in the world are ever-changing. Women are finding themselves and becoming bolder. Life itself is changing. This is exactly what motivates her as well.
(FYI, it's only 1958 in this story.)
#PennedPossibilities 349 — What is your MC’s relationship with their gender? How do they express or not express this relationship?
Randall hates most men because of how idiotic and bigoted they seem to be. Most of the ones in his field of work, which happens to be journalism, are racist, sexist arseholes. He hates it. The only thing he can do is treat others (i.e. women, people of different cultures or skin colors, and disabled individuals) better. He believes in equality.
#PennedPossibilities 350 — If you were to ever meet your MC, would you two get along?
Randall and I both suffer from OCD, are on the spectrum, write stories and poetry, and are quirky book, film, and music lovers. Heck yeah, we would. Lix and I would as well. She's a strong, independent woman with a clever and witty personality, someone who can also be ridiculous and silly at times, and I just KNOW we would get along really well. I love that thought.
#PennedPossibilities 351 — What smells remind your SC of their childhood?
Freshly baked goods would have to be the answer to this one. Whenever Bel steps into a bakery, she's instantly transported back to her childhood. Her best friend growing up, someone that she's still rather close with, loved baking with her mum. Bel adored helping as well. It was always fun. She owned a bakery, and her daughter (Bel's friend) continued things along and has the business now.
#PennedPossibilities 352 — What advice would you give to help others create plotlines?
This is such a good question, and I wanted to see everyone's good advice to be offered.
For my answer, I actually found a few fantastic articles, only because there's far too much to say in a single post on here. They're down below.
Plotlines can be the trickiest thing for fiction authors. We all struggle with them if we're just starting out with an idea.
Create tense narratives with exciting premises Plotting a narrative can be one of the most rewarding tasks for writers…but where do you begin? A good plot is well-structured, and bursting with conflict and character. In this article, we'll...
#PennedPossibilities 353 — What is your SC's biggest fear?
Losing her team at The Hour, these people in her life, her true friends. This has become the biggest nightmare that she hopes will never happen. Losing anyone on her team has become a near constant fear. Bel almost lost her sweetheart, but thankfully he pulled through and was alright after the beating that nearly took his life. She's so protective over everyone now. They've become a family, and she can't lose them.
#PennedPossibilities 354 — Describe your SC or MC’s relationship with their birthplace or homeland.
Randall is Scottish. There's no denying it, not with THAT accent. He goes home whenever he can. He grew up with so many cousins that it felt like they were all his siblings, even though he had none to speak of. His relationship with home can be described with one word: connection. It's his home, and it always will be. He has traveled the world, but he always misses Scotland.
#PennedPossibilities 355 — If your MC desires friends, do they see every meeting as an opportunity to make a new friend?
Not in the line of work that Randall and Lix are in, they don't. They work in both news and television. The people they're surrounded by and meet with every day, aside from those they work with and are very close to, are usually lying and scheming bastards. So, as the saying goes... "Keep your friends close and your enemies closer."
#PennedPossibilities 356 — Share an excerpt from your WIP that either shows your villain's true colors or perfectly describes them as a person or being.
Alright, then. Here it is. Sharing anything else right now would just be a spoiler.
#PennedPossibilities 357 — MC POV: Tell us about one of your bad habits.
Randall: I am complex and compulsive. I know it. While I'm compulsive, I'm not IMPULSIVE. I'm good at my job. I'm a journalist. I'm a listener, not a talker. One thing I will say, though, is my habit of organizing things tends to annoy others. Unless they know me and are used to it. I feel terribly about it.
(For the record, it's 1958. OCD wasn't known about back then, and neither was neurodivergence.)
#PennedPossibilities 358 — How would your characters react to an apocalypse? (It could be one with zombies, monsters, full societal collapse, etc.)
This is such an interesting concept. Freddie and Bel would be lost, along with the others on the team, but Lix and Randall (our MCs) would be alright. They would take care of everyone. They've seen the worst of war, which includes societal collapse, and they've survived it all. Killing zombies, though? That would be interesting.
#PennedPossibilities 359 — What part of a story do you have the hardest time writing?
Emotionally, for me, it would have to be finally writing the end. It means that I have to say goodbye to something that I've been working so hard on. It's saying goodbye to this entire universe that I've created and something that dumped my time, sleepless nights, endless energy, and all my love into. That's the toughest part for me.
#PennedPossibilities 360 — Where did your MC's core personality traits come from? (e.g. lack of friends growing up can equal clingy traits, or overcoming hardships early on can create traits of strength.)
Randall has terrible OCD, is autistic, and is also a quirky man. He grew up with so few friends but had a gigantic family (meaning lots of cousins) and they loved him. This molded him into the man that he is today. He has suffered so much hardship in his life. He's STRONG.
#PennedPossibilities 360 — Where did your MC's core personality traits come from? (e.g. lack of friends growing up can equal clingy traits, or overcoming hardships early on can create traits of strength.)
Also of note: his life and being a war photographer and lifelong journalist changed him.
This journey did these two things:
• It strongly influenced the way his character, traits, and opinions developed.
• It also educated and shaped him into a particular form (who he is).
#PennedPossibilities 361 — SC POV: What would you ever say to the MC if you were given the chance and the right timing?
Bel: I would tell Randall that he's like a family member to me. I don't know which, either a brother or an uncle. I don't know. I love him. I would tell him just how deeply I care for him, and just how badly I want he and Lix to find happiness together. If Freddie and I can do it, anything is possible. I would tell him that he isn't broken as well. He isn't.
#PennedPossibilities 362 — How stable is your MC’s physical health? (Do they go for semi-regular checkups by a physician? Do they have any diagnosed illnesses and / or take any medication? How often do they get sick?)
Randall is a rather healthy man, despite his thin frame. He takes care of himself. Mentally, now that's a different story entirely. He goes to the doctor regularly, has had no recent issues, and that's that. Lix is the same as well. They're rarely ever ill.
#PennedPossibilities 363 — Have you been able to reach your intended audience with your stories?
Yes, I have~! I'm very lucky. And as far as this wonderful place goes, because my friends and I all share our stories with one another, I'm incredibly happy. We love, support, and help each other however and wherever we can.
Target audience acquired!
Surround yourself with writers who are all willing to help each other and I PROMISE that you will find your target audience. You'll find each other.
#PennedPossibilities 364 — Do you ever dream about your various characters?
Oh, all the time! I'm constantly dreaming about my characters, stories, new ideas, et cetera. My dreams can be wild. They'll have long storylines. Sometimes, I dream in black and white as well. I'm a gigantic #TCM fan and mostly watch old films, so this doesn't surprise me one bit. I'm also a fan of musicals and am a musician as well, so I'll sometimes dream in musical format. That's always a hoot. But yes, I love it.
#PennedPossibilities 365 — 1st Anniversary Edition: How does your MC view their mother?
Lix's mother is an atrocious woman. She loved her father. He was such a dear man, and he adored her. He loved /everyone/, but he and Lix were the closest. Her mother cares only for money, status, and her other "normal" daughters. Lix was the black sheep of the family, leaving home to become a journalist! *gasp* A woman doing a man's job? How disgusting! She's ridiculous. Lix stays far away.
I just wanted to give a great big thank you to EVERYONE who has supported, read, and / or taken part in this hashtag. I've been posting prompts here for a year now, and it's so wonderful to see the community grow this deep in. I'm overjoyed that it's helped so many of you. Thank you so much for helping and coming along for the ride. I'm giving everyone gigantic (but psychic) hugs! 💚
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#PennedPossibilities 366 — What is your SC likely to take away from a painful experience?
Strength and the ability to persevere, I should think. That's what Bel remembers from the aftermath of Freddie's beating, anyway. She's a strong woman. They overcame the situation together, and he survived.
#PennedPossibilities 367 — What would you do if you found an anachronism or other item out of place in the timeframe of your story, especially if it’s major?
Credit: @NaraMoore
If I found /anything/ out of place in a WIP, especially a chronological inconsistency of some sort, I would have to fix it. I could never let something major like that go. It would have to be written out, the story's chapters rewritten or altered, or the WIP's layout "fixed" somehow to make things work.
#PennedPossibilities 368 — What’s your favorite writing snack or drink?
An easier question for tonight!
My go-to drinks and snacks are either water or tea, sometimes iced coffee, and fruit. When I'm feeling particularly naughty, I'll search for a bag of Doritos or Cheetos to have with chopsticks, just to keep my fingers clean for typing. LOL.
#PennedPossibilities 369 — How do your characters express romantic love?
In general, by keeping it hidden until it eats them alive.
Sorry. Too dark? But it's true.
I'm a romance author. While it may happen differently in stories — the how or why things will occur — this is generally the start of it all. They hide away, whether it's for self-perseveration, confusion, anger (with Enemies to Lovers stories), or not feeling as if they're worthy or good enough to be the one. It happens, sometimes.
#PennedPossibilities 370 — Does your SC prefer taking risks or having a safety net?
Ethan: I take risks all the bloody time. I'm a Sanctum warrior. Risk-taking has always been something I neither shy away from nor am afraid of. Lachlainn is the same way, same as Caorall. Maybe it runs in the family. Lach was a Sanctum member years ago as well. Besides, I'm a werewolf. I take risks everyday by just daring to remain alive. I could be found out at any time.
#PennedPossibilities 371 — Is your MC possessive over people or things that matter a lot to them? How do they express that possessiveness, or lack thereof?
Lachlainn isn't possessive or clingy. He's suffered loss, gone to war, and has also been homeless for a time, but things are better now. He has his ancestral home, has a family who loves and cares for him, and is a professor. Despite these changes, he is neither possessive nor uncaring. He's somewhere in the middle.
#PennedPossibilities 372 — MC POV: What makes you strong? (This could be taken in an emotional or physical way.)
Lachlainn: Emotionally speaking? Well... Friends. My brothers, too. My animals. The people and creatures around me make and keep me strong. They build me back up again when the days are tougher than they should be. Physically, though? My magick does the job.
#PennedPossibilities 373 — Do any of your characters have irrational fears?
Caorall is the youngest sibling. He has dark, curly hair and a fiery temper. He’s a tradesman. He actually makes musical instruments. Lach is the oldest, with Ethan in the middle. If ANYONE in our series was going to have a completely irrational phobia, it would have to be Caorall. It would be something like arachibutyrophobia, too. It's the fear of peanut butter sticking to the roof of your mouth.
#PennedPossibilities 374 — MC POV: In what way are you selfish?
Lach: I want /her/. I have always wanted her. We were a beautiful tragedy. It was never meant to be for us. Now it isn't allowed. /We/ aren't allowed. Perhaps it's time to break the rules. She makes me feel selfish. I know that she feels the same way. Everything has changed now that I know she's still alive. For years, I thought she was dead. Things are different now.
#PennedPossibilities 375 — What sort of religions are there in your WIP?
Credit: @HeliaXyana
Our world in #TheFireRavenSociety series is filled with various (original) Pagan religions. No more spoilers than that for now. But yes, polytheism is the norm.
#PennedPossibilities 376 — Be honest. How messy is your writing space at the moment?
It's actually very clean at the moment, surprisingly. I try to keep things neat. I do a weekend reset after a heavy writing or gaming session the night before. I clean up as I go. But if I'm sick and sat by my computer... That's another story entirely. I'll be lounging around in pajamas, my desk a bit messy... It always gets cleaned up, though. My brain would never allow me to leave things all over the place.
#PennedPossibilities 377 — MC POV: When have you experienced “heaven on earth?”
Lach: Whenever I've been in her arms. There's nothing more to say. Elspeth was my love, but I lost her. She died.
(Oooh, plot twist? Possibly. Maybe it's not even real.)
#PennedPossibilities 378 — What is your SC burningly passionate about?
For Ethan, it would be peace. He is a skilled warlock and warrior for a reason. He protects the innocent.
For Caorall, while it might also be peace, of course, the second half of that answer would be his trade. He handmakes musical instruments. Work, hand-cut trees and the perfection of wood, and using his hands are his passions.
#PennedPossibilities 379 — As a writer, are there any lines that you simply will not cross?
There are many things I won't write. But that's just ME. Everyone is different. Respect is key here. Write with love, knowledge, kindness, and proper representation of characters, the time period, etc.
Below I'm going to show a few Reddit conversations that I came across recently. It's interesting, if nothing else.
#PennedPossibilities 380 — SC POV: Tell us about one of your bad habits.
Ethan: I assume things. To be fair, yes, I usually assume the worst as well. It's a habit that I'm /trying/ to work on. My brothers usually yell at me enough for it. I'm trying, alright? Doesn't that count for something, at least?
#PennedPossibilities 381 — Does your MC have any allergies?
(Something easy for tonight after last night's prompt!)
Lachlainn is deathly allergic to a few select fruits. I won't mention their names here, just in case anyone's looking to poison him. 😂
#PennedPossibilities 382 — MC POV: Write about a time you said no.
Lach: This happened decades ago. I told Ellie that I couldn't run away with her. She wanted me beside her, and for us to leave. She wanted me with her and far away from it all. Elspeth begged, which was something she wasn't in the habit of /ever/ doing. She wanted me to turn my back on the Sanctum and escape for a different life. I never was very good at doing things for myself, though.
#PennedPossibilities 383 — Is your SC merciful? Why or why not?
Yes, Ethan is a merciful man. Despite his past and current work for the Sanctum, he wants to help to REFORM criminals. He cares. He has never been a fan of having to end another being's life. People can change, and he understands that. He is a merciful man, and he wants to save people.
#PennedPossibilities 384 — What is your MC’s legacy? What do they want to be remembered for and what might they actually be remembered for?
Lach wants to be remembered for being a GOOD man. He isn't perfect. He's made mistakes, of course, but he has such a big heart. He wants that to be what he's remembered for: his compassionate choices and the help he's given. His friends and family would think of that. Unfortunately, old warriors would remember a fighter, not a lover.
#PennedPossibilities 385 — How does your SC handle sadness and depression?
Not well. These days, though, things have started to change for Ethan. He has a "mate" and they're doing well together. They're married, both of them have been through hell, and they're all the stronger for it. Sadness and depression might follow them around, but they support one another in any and every way possible. They have to, and they want to. That's love.
#PennedPossibilities 386 — What are some of your favorite themes (ones you’ve either written or read) in novels? (1/3)
I'm going to give some random examples of mine because I love them.
• Faith vs Doubt:
Whether it’s faith in a god, other people, or the protagonist’s own self, believing isn’t easy.
• Loneliness:
It affects the way people think, act, and view the world. The theme of loneliness charts how certain characters contend with their loneliness, and whether man can survive ~ (cont.)
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