"How did you know he was our culprit?" asked the detective.

The rookie shrugged modestly. "It was a good disguise. But nobody has such a #querulous voice, unless they're faking it."

"Really?"

"Not that I've come across. Well... apart from you. Sir."

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#TimeTravelingGhost Part 15B: Luminelle Bijou

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“Mademoiselle, she is asking your name,” Countess said.

Who was she, Countess Elizabeth Báthory? Countess Mircalla Karnstein? Marguerite Chopin? Countess? Comtesse de Pougy turned? All, some?” The names tumbled through my head.

Still puzzling over her identity, I began, “My name, I—I don’t know what…” I caught myself. I had meant to say, “I don’t know what your real name is, Countess?” But that wouldn’t do. How could I #trust that some evil might not befall me if she sensed I suspected?

My tone turned #querulous. “My name? I don’t think I have one. Mademoiselle Baker, you would honor me if you gave me one. I’d always remember your dance—and your face—whenever someone called it.”

The Countess clapped silently, fingers fluttering like moths, and exclaimed, “Charming. Quite charming. So romantic.”

Josephine touched a finger to her chin, as if pointing to the dimple in her cheek. She tilted her head, thoughtful, then smiled. “Luminelle Bijou,” she said. “Mademoiselle Luminelle Bijou. My radiant jewel. A fan I shall always remember.”

At that moment, there was a light knock at the door, followed by the doorman’s voice. “Mademoiselle Baker, a Monsieur La Rothchild is here to see you. He has some magnificent flowers.”

Josephine brought her palms together with a theatrical sigh. “Please excuse me. I must see this important person. But I am happy you came, Comtesse, and I was delighted to meet you, Mademoiselle Bijou.”

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#Prompt: #querulous

From my 17yo poet-son - https://www.poetry.com/poet/Dylan+Miller+-+Writer - (give him a like or two on his poetry page!):

Quite a bizzare prompt,
Up there with the
Excruciatingly weird,
Random ones. I don't
Understand it, but I
Like it like that! It's
Out there. How does one
Use querulous in a simple
Sentence? So confusing!

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i’m not saying just
saying that querulous is
my cat’s middle name

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#MastoPrompt #querulous
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The #MastoPrompt for Saturday 28 June 2025 is:

#querulous

The poem or story can include the prompt word or be about the prompt word.

@ me, if you like, or just include the #MastoPrompt tag (to allow people to follow or filter their feeds), or keep your work to yourself - all the options are good as long as you're writing.

If you're including an image please do include alt-text if you’re able to.

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