Double the praise, halve the criticism.

[Redrafted to change 'half' to 'halve', (because I want the dynamic imperitive verbs, rather than the static nouns - 'Double' being a polyptoton)].

#rhetoric or #wisdom ? f'kit: #polyptoton - you never know... #ScreamingIntoTheVoid

𝗵𝗮𝗶𝗯𝘂𝗻 𝗮𝗻𝗱 𝗵𝗮𝗶𝗸𝘂 𝗼𝗻 𝗳𝗹𝘂𝗶𝗱𝗶𝘁𝘆
𝘸𝘪𝘵𝘩 𝘙𝘦𝘭𝘢𝘵𝘪𝘰𝘯𝘴𝘩𝘪𝘱 𝘔𝘢𝘯𝘢𝘨𝘦𝘮𝘦𝘯𝘵, 𝘌𝘮𝘣𝘢𝘳𝘳𝘢𝘴𝘴𝘮𝘦𝘯𝘵 𝘢𝘯𝘥 𝘘𝘶𝘦𝘴𝘵𝘪𝘰𝘯𝘴 𝘢𝘣𝘰𝘶𝘵 𝘏𝘰𝘸 𝘵𝘰 𝘈𝘤𝘵

Sundial snow shadow
hide and seek our otherselves
touch and try to go

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#haibun #haiku #poetry #smallpoems #fluidity #fluid #RelationshipManagement #Embarrassment #Shirane #basho #SRGs #relief #redemption #escape #emotions #Sundial #snow #shadow #hideandseek #touchandgo #polyptoton