To give an insight (and sneak-peek) into the types of revisions I make, here is a line from my upcoming book. The first is the original draft, the second is the edit.

Picture it, Anne and Elijah in the Ready Room. Elijah is fighting with the replicator...again.

Original: "You know it can simply make the coffee for you."

Edit: “You do know replicators have this fascinating capability of making a cup of coffee for you.”

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The final chapter of Ghosts of Vega is now out.

This is it, the end of the first book. But the crew’s journey is only beginning.

I’ll be taking a little break and also am working on some tweaks in the next book, Stranded in Space. I’ll of course let everyone know when I start posting the next book.

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Glenn Corbett got typecast as the stranded Earthling on an alien planet.

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