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⚙️ Roy Phillips Feb 2, 2025

I'd be interested in feedback on this #logline. On Netflix, say, would you click or scroll on by.
"With raiders closing in, a young noblewoman defies the patriarchy, wielding her Celtic heritage and Roman education to save her community, while forging an unlikely bond with a Saxon warrior."

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Nov 1, 2023

#WordWeavers
2023-11-01: Introduce your story as if it were a high-budget film or series coming soon.

There is a murderer loose in the Most Sacred house. One knightly cadet is dead. How many more are doomed to follow? Cut off from help, one cadet must hunt down the perpetrators before they can silence her and her entire troop.

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Liath LaVerne Hawke Aug 13, 2023

New story idea. I got a rough logline this morning while basicly listening to a metal version of "Devil went down to Georgia" (which I love btw and grew up listening to it) and I was kinda in my head to get rid of some emotional stuff still dragging me down from last night. Sometimes being in my head is a good thing, I guess lol. Thinking about submitting this logline to a contest while I develop the story. #AmWriting #HeadStuff #Writing #logline

Cédric Jouarie Jul 24, 2023

Would greatly appreciate #feedback on this #logline:
The WISH HOTEL will indefinitely close its doors at the end of the week. For the staff, the family running the nearby restaurant, and even the customers, these last few days will bring challenges and life-changing events.

Cam Feb 27, 2023

New #logline for my #pilot Fill Count. What do you think?

In a desperate bid for one last shot at baseball glory, an aging slugger teams up with a vampire whose allegiance to his own kind is threatened, as they both risk everything to boost the slugger's performance on the field

Rob Christopher Feb 25, 2023

#screenwriting feedback--your thoughts on this #logline for DEPRAVED INDIFFERENCE?

Evangeline Slote, an unholy amalgam of Elizabeth Taylor and Sarah Palin, is the matriarch of a family of con artists who specialize in identity theft. When her alcoholic husband Warren is felled by a massive heart attack, she and her unnaturally devoted son Devin concoct a desperate scheme to end all schemes—which may require the elimination of an elderly and very rich socialite to complete.

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