Looking for feedback/sensitivity readers on Indigenous representation in Fully Automated - SLRPNK

Hey! Our game tries to integrate into its vision of the future an assumption of the restoration of Indigenous culture and agency on Turtle Island. As we’re getting ready to release, we’d really appreciate getting more eyes on it and letting us know how it reads and if there are any changes we can make to improve its quality. The main section which I’d like thoughts on is below. This is taken from the section of the World Guide describing major historical events and turning points. Constructive feedback would be appreciated. Feel free to copy, share, repost, ect. to any other forum where it may get attention, and direct folks to contact us through any social media or email channels on our website (https://fullyautomatedrpg.com [https://fullyautomatedrpg.com]). And thanks! > 2042 - The Yurok People v. The Bureau of Land Management > >In 2028, congress passed the Federal Ordnance for Restoration of Environments for Sustainable Territories (or FOREST) Act. The FOREST Act was a massive compromise legislation which created new programs to encourage forestry management. It included terms to make preserving and expanding forests as carbon sinks financially competitive with logging and mineral extraction by allowing companies to sell carbon offsets; funded construction of new parks; relaxed limits on hunting; and provided dozens of other favors for the various stakeholders needed to secure passage. One of its 35 sections even contained a largely symbolic gesture to American Indian tribes which would return neglected land to them under conditions which were believed unlikely to ever be exercised. > >The effects were mixed. By 2038, millions of additional acres of land had been set aside as protected reserves. Many policy experts believed that the reduction in drilling and fracking that occurred was driven more by local bans and a rapid decline in financing as the banking sector began to recognize that new carbon infrastructure had become such frequent targets of sabotage that their risk wasn’t worth the declining returns. Eventually, the carbon offsets market crashed in 2041 following the Second Paradise Fire. A lawsuit followed. > >During Our Children’s Trust v. Green Growth Climate Solutions, the climate advocacy group Our Children’s Trust showed that Green Growth Climate Solutions had purchased hundreds of square miles and contracted with the Federal Bureau of Land Management to be responsible for forestry management of thousands more of federally held land in order to sell worthless carbon offsets. At the same time, they’d neglected to perform any meaningful sustainable forestry services as contracted. During the trial, experts testified to the well-known fact that carbon offsets were a junk science that did not meaningfully address the climate crisis, and that the fire danger created by hundreds of thousands of acres of neglected land was well known. > >The judgment put Green Growth Climate Solutions out of business and crashed the market for carbon offsets. It also created a scandal for the Bureau of Land Management, which was wholly under-resourced and unequipped to fulfill their legal responsibilities to manage the vast tracts of land that now returned to their oversight. A solution came in the form of The Yurok People v. the Bureau of Land Management in 2042. > >As soon as the Green Growth case wrapped, the Yurok People brought a suit to enforce section 33 of the FOREST Act of 2028. In the trial against Green Growth it had been shown that the land belonging to the Bureau of Land Management that they’d contracted to Green Growth and the land privately held by Green Growth (which reverted to BLM following Green Growth’s desolation) had been left fallow for nearly a decade. In a crowning achievement for the First Peoples’ legal movement, a judge concurred that these circumstances fulfilled the conditions outlined in section 33, and granted them 8,000 square miles of territory. > >Green Growth’s practices had been common throughout the industry, and as the market crashed and more suits were brought in other states, native groups reclaimed millions of acres more. Though the judgements were stinging, the federal government saw a silver lining. Responsibility for the ever-growing problem of wildfires now rested with the native groups who’d won their cases. > >Over the 2040s, the various nations of the first peoples managed to surprise the doubters. They formed the Circle of Nations to assist in inter-tribal management of their expansive returned territories. > >They turned land assumed to be of low value into productive food forests, nature reserves, scientific centers, parks, and traditional hunting preserves. While reducing uncontrolled fires, they turned the land into a source of wealth and influence. They granted permissions to communes which met their strict qualifying requirements to live upon the land and learn their techniques. They fed and housed themselves and then thousands upon thousands more. > >By the 2060s, the Circle of Nations and the first peoples had become a highly influential force within American science and policy. As society at large underwent a radical rethinking during the years following the Treaty of Antarctica, many of the values and practices of the first people finally saw overdue adoption within the wider culture of the second people.

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