It's almost time for my final planned edit before I start querying: trim down the 2385 words I added when I made the OTHER edits. 😅😭
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Only 5 more books left (out of 60+) to finish out the new finance spreadsheet! Then a few checks for accuracy and I have a new system working for Space Wizard!
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Capitalization Tip: File Formats

👉 Most of the time, use all caps for file formats:

“Discussing GIFs out loud is now against office rules. The last argument over pronunciation ended in two black eyes and a broken toe.”

"I forgot to attach the PDF!"

👉 But use lowercase when writing them as extensions:

“Look for the .docx extension on the file name.”

“Maybe downloading Virus.exe was a mistake.”

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Harper is not too great for doing spell checks. It identifies that words are wrong but is abysmal at suggesting alternatives.

As far as grammar / punctuation / case checking, it seems pretty good so far.

This is definitely taking a place in my edit process.

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Harper | Privacy-First Offline Grammar Checker

Harper checks your writing instantly—fast, lightweight and utterly private—so you can polish every clause without surrendering a single keystroke.

Harper

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Be aware of filter words. How distant do you want your readers to feel?

https://www.louiseharnbyproofreader.com/blog/filter-words-in-fiction-purposeful-inclusion-and-dramatic-restriction

Saw, felt, noticed, thought are just four examples. Louise's blog post (linked above) is one of the best discussions of filter words I have come across.

Filter words in fiction: Purposeful inclusion and dramatic restriction

If you’re looking for ways to inject some drama into your novel’s sentences, omitting filter words could be just the ticket. Do so judiciously though. Including them can add texture to mood and voice.

Louise Harnby | Crime Fiction and Thriller Editor

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When writing dialogue, if you indicate a pause in someone's speech with an em dash, you don't need to include "paused" or "stopped" or other such wording in the action beat/attribution. The dash shows us that there's a pause.

Get right to the meat of what happens in that beat, instead. Do they (pause and) listen? Tap a foot impatiently? Make rude hand gestures for the benefit of others in the room with them?

"Hi, Marian, I just wanted to ask—" Diana held the phone a bit away from her ear and grimaced. Everyone in the room could hear Marian's diatribe, even if they couldn't make out the words.

Made pomegranate jelly today, and got a bunch more done on the finance spreadsheet. Going much quicker now, and I hope to finish up in a few more days. Then I get to play with data!
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Your semi-regular reminder that in Chicago style, words formed with "non" are generally styled closed (without a hyphen).

nonexistent
nonviolent
nonnegotiable
nonrefundable

but: non-beer-drinking (affixing it to an already hyphenated tern takes a hyphen)

Churned through a lot of finance data today updating the spreadsheet. I think I got all the hard parts done, so maybe the rest will go a little quicker.
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