A client has me thinking about chapters.

Chapters can feel essayistic (coving a topic) or episodic (covering an event). Some writers care most about their length.

I consider their shape & how they make patterns & how the breaks influence a reader's experience.

They're kind of arbitrary like paragraphs--which is fun.

How do you think about chapters?

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@allisonwyss I've been thinking about this lately, because it really depends on the book for me.

I have some books where one chapter = one scene, which can be anywhere from 2500-6500 words.

I have some books where one chapter is multiple scenes, all focusing in around one event/thing that needs to be covered.

And I have one series of books with very few chapters where each scene within is ~2500-4500 words, so the chapters are long. (cont next)

@allisonwyss But for those, they were written serially, and what is now chapters for publication used to be arcs, covering a specific set of events. In the one I'm editing now, each arc corresponds to a position in the Celtic cross tarot layout.

I feel like, in the end, as long as there are pause points within chapters, long ones are okay.

But short chapters are like popcorn and really make a book kind of drag you through it as you read. JUST ONE MORE.

@tryslora

Short chapters are like popcorn! Yes!

And sometimes with short chapters, I actually get frustrated because I want a break, but keep feeling like I can't take one yet. It's almost like with too many breaks, the breaks disappear or turn into something more like paragraph breaks.

@allisonwyss YES, I've run into that with short chapters. The brain is like... but it's only a few pages. We can keep going. Whereas when I know it's another 10-20 pages, I know it's time to put it down and do something else for a bit.
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I don't know if either of you have read anything in Spanish, but oftentimes the paragraphs can go on for pages, let alone the chapters! Interesting how these choices are kind of language specific

@AJSWritesthings @tryslora

I don't read in Spanish, but I've certainly read translations that do that. I find it kind of wonderful and breathless and exhausting.

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@tryslora
I'm reading one at the moment and the chapters are ≈100 pages long, the paragraphs are ≈2 pages long, and all the dialogue is inline. Really narrow margins too 😂

@allisonwyss @AJSWritesthings my brain just freaked out slightly I think!!

Also I feel way less guilty about 40 page chapters now!