Mastodawn

Wrote this tonight, and damn if it isn't one of the saddest things.

“Peace is just war holding its breath.”

@natania Oh that's good and super sad.

@proactivebusybody @natania great sentence! Sounds like a heartbreaking world you’re building

@adanvers @proactivebusybody Thank you! Everyone's had it pretty bad in this story, but the one who speaks the line particularly so.

@natania that's painful, and also excellent writing.

@natania Oof. That hits.

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@natania a gut punch in the best possible way (which on the face of it sounds absurd--but isn't)

@thisjulieday beautiful and terrible

@natania beautiful and sad. Thank you

That would make a great opening line.