#writersCoffeeClub 7 Feb 'Share a pair of consecutive lines. What does the first line promise, does the second fulfil that?'
I haven’t prepared a sketch with the dress, because I’m not that good at artwork.
But this dress was the inspiration for the final 3 chapters of book 1
A-line One Shoulder Sweep Train Tulle Prom Dress in Sky Blue by Babaroni Panjai
https://babaroni.co.uk/products/a-line-one-shoulder-sweep-train-tulle-prom-dresses-sky-blue
#writersCoffeeClub 7 Feb 'Share a pair of consecutive lines. What does the first line promise, does the second fulfil that?'
Unless you want bland predictability, you do not get fulfilled promises with two consecutive lines. You get it pages or chapters later on. One chapter after the dress is mentioned, the reader learns more.
#SlenderWolf is a massive jigsaw puzzle.
Half the fun is putting the pieces together over time.
#writersCoffeeClub 6 Feb 'From start to finish WIP time lapse'
Each novel in the #SlenderWolf series is in effect one school year from September to the following June (subject to a little artistic licence)
There are some gaps between them, you get to meet the kids of KristalClear and NutJob in book 3 as primary school kids, and in book 5 as secondary school kids. Book 6 ends with the kids at 15 and 16, mirroring book 1 when the MCs were both 16
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Scott Rochester