BubbleCow

@bubblecow
25 Followers
67 Following
72 Posts

Developmental book editor (Gary Smailes) with over twenty years experience of helping hundreds of self-publishing writers.

My first 'real job' in publishing was working on the Horrible Histories series, but I started BubbleCow in 2007.

I am also a traditionally published author with twenty plus books in print. My agent is Andrew Lownie.

Websitehttps://bubblecow.com
Gary Smaileshttps://mastodon.social/@garysmailes

Today's edit is a gritty fantasy book with a re-imagining of European Medieval society whilst under the power of the Catholic church. Its really good. Reminds me of Joe Abercrombie's The Devils, which is a right good read.

#amEditing #writing

Perhaps the best guide to spotting AI writing... https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Wikipedia:Signs_of_AI_writing

#writing

Wikipedia:Signs of AI writing - Wikipedia

Last day of editing this romance novel.

One issue has been a tendency to try and tell the story in the narrative. Often, the writer is moving the dialogue into the narrative summary. This is always bad. Try to keep the story in the words and actions of the characters and not told via the narrator.

#amEditing #writing

Started reading The Hounding by Xenobe Purvis over Easter. Only good things to say about this book.

https://www.goodreads.com/book/show/217388147-the-hounding

#books

The Hounding

The Crucible meets The Virgin Suicides in this haunting…

Goodreads

Back to editing after the Easter break. This week its a modern romance novel.

#amEditing #writing

I might have to get out my minis and battlemap to deal with this complex part of the story. Too many people and I need to create photo-states for each part so I can keep track. Do any of you have a trick for complex bits?

#writing #WritingTips #AmWriting #WritingCommunity #ttrpg #dnd

The Off-World Aesthetic of Quebec’s Angine de Poitrine - JazzTimes

One cannot look away from Angine de Poitrine (angina pectoris). These masked, strangely hatted, prosthetic-nosed, symmetrically polka-dotted, voice-distorted, oddly gesturing figures who go by Klec … Read More "The Off-World Aesthetic of Quebec’s Angine de Poitrine"

JazzTimes

Recently Hachette cancelled the novel *Shy Girl*, worried it was written by AI.

I've linked this below, its interesting.

However, I suspect the reason the book has been cancelled has nothing to do with ethics and EVERYTHING to do with the fact that AI work can't be copyrighted.

Publishers are more worried about protecting their moats than they are about the ethics of AI.

BTW, I write this as an author that has been published by Hachette.

https://www.theguardian.com/books/2026/mar/20/hachette-horror-novel-shy-girl-suspected-ai-use-mia-ballard

#ai #writing #books

Hachette pulls horror novel Shy Girl after suspected AI use

The publisher has cancelled the US release of Shy Girl by Mia Ballard and withdrawn the UK edition after weeks of online speculation about the novel’s origins

The Guardian

Just a reminder, when formatting text the first paragraph of a chapter is flush, the rest are indented.

#amEditing #writing

Starting the week with a free sample edit, looks like an interesting project. The writer's main concern is the book length, since it is sitting at 170k. Going to assess if we can split into two (or three) books.

Each project is different but for longer manuscripts I often feel creating multiple books is the best answer since it often produces a ready made series. The problem is narrative arc, which will often need some work to fix.

#amEditing #writing