NaraMoore ⛩️👻八尺様👻⛩️ at Fedi#wordweavers 25 What do you think about the last scene you wrote.
The dialog works, but the ending is weak. It should improve with revision.
#wordweavers 25 What do you think about the last scene you wrote.
The dialog works, but the ending is weak. It should improve with revision.