HI gamedev! I need help! I got this back from a composer, and it doesn't feel right yet. What do you all think?

It's for the music that plays when the player is in combat in Titans of Ealuh, which is a monster catching/battling game that is blind accessible. Anyone have any thoughts? I feel like it might be too busy for a song that will play a lot. Or maybe it's the stabs that are a little too intense for something a player will hear a lot? What do you all think? #gamedev #music