If you're reading a proof that seems too good to be true, you should quickly get a sense of the whole argument, then focus on the parts that seem likely to be wrong.
You shouldn't take a portion of the proof that's correct, and optimize it. But that's what I've just done.
This new claimed proof of the 4-color theorem, just 6 pages long, uses a formula for counting rooted planar maps. But there's a simpler formula that would greatly simplify some of the arguments!
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