Passive voice is not a mistake. It is a tool with specific jobs.
"The window was broken sometime before dawn." The mystery is the point. The actor vanishing is doing work.
The real problem is passive voice you did not choose. Over 20 percent in narrative writing and you are probably hiding your actors without realizing it.

https://inkbreaker.com/guides/passive-voice

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Bookshop find. Decades of Oz books, all written to be read by a child who wanted to stay in the story.

Readability is that simple at its core. Not dumbing down. Not impressing anyone. Just not losing your reader.

New guide on what Flesch Reading Ease and Grade Level actually tell you about your prose, and when to ignore them entirely. https://inkbreaker.com/guides/readability

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