What do y’all think of this one? I feel like the contrast is way off and I didn’t have the correct color to give her skin a highlight. What can I do to make this better? #Critique #Question #CritiqueMe #Opinion #Art #Artist #Lorenzo #Marker ,#Watercolor #ArtistOfTikTok #ArtistOfInstagram #ArtistFYP #FYP #Read #Green #Original #OriginalArt #OriginalArtist #thoughtspaintedred #tasteme #2025 #hijab #tasteme #coloredpencils

My first attempt at #watercolour (or #watercolor if you are u-phobic) pencils. I followed a kind of step by step (not enough steps in my view), and I know:

- the values are too flat
- I should have left more of the paper white
- there's too much detail, and it's too messy

But any feedback would be appreciated!

#mastoart #critiqueme

btw I welcome creative suggestions on my writing :) I prefer suggestions to criticism, but if it must be criticism than coat it nicely please :)

I post daily cybre-themed flash fiction from my wxcafe account: @loveisanalogue

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Laid down some flats/shadows to see how it's progressing.

Okay? Okay enough? It can be hard to tell at times. Anyways, #mastoart #creativetoots #critiqueme https://mastodon.social/media/QIdugsSrI_gMk7HqHDk

Actually, gonna tag this with #mastoart #creativetoots #critiqueme , because I'm genuinely interested to hear if I've gotten the proportions good enough.
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