As you know I hate „allies“ invading queer spaces. As a writing challenge I wanted to write a story told from the second person for ages. I began today. Let‘s see how this works out.

Of course I am interested into feedback - but please do not expect that I care about it. I know what I want to tell and how to tell. Feedback is expectation management for myself :)

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@jascha I stumbled over the "describe it afterward" and had to read it two or three times. How about:

> But you thought about it, and wanted to be prepared. You googled the venue, and thought about what you would wear. You even started thinking about how you could describe it afterwards, if asked.

@SchwarzeLocke der Text ist schon ganz anders geworden und fertig :)
@jascha Ah, hab ich zu spät gesehen, ich hab nur gesehen dass ich am Ende der Screenshots bin. Hat sich ja noch ganz schön verändert.
@SchwarzeLocke ja so passiert das manchmal mit Texten :)