rumors of peace
what I learned
from the dune grass
rumors of peace
what I learned
from the dune grass
@extraspecialbitter @NaraMoore
rumors of peace
what I learned
from the dune grass
When seas turn angry, sand dunes
have always brokered peace
Wind whispers
Of hidden things
Buried in the sand
Our footprints on beach sand
only touch the Milky Way
tranquil sunrise walk
a lone angler casts seaward
sanderlings take flight
Peregine watching
The cycle's apex
@MarkBrigham @extraspecialbitter
#Haiku #Renga #連歌 #RengaThis #WakaPoetry #和歌 #NMPoetry #PoetryOnTheFly
sparrowhawk
we agree
to disagree
Crows on the flying
Argue unrelenting
@extraspecialbitter @MarkBrigham
#Haiku #Renga #連歌 #RengaThis #WakaPoetry #和歌 #NMPoetry #PoetryOnTheFly
red-shouldered hawk
a cold and lonely vigil
above the river
@NaraMoore @extraspecialbitter @stevendbrewer
I fiddled with your verses this morning, and added some of my own. I’m sure I broke some rules.
See pics
@stevendbrewer @NaraMoore @extraspecialbitter
Meta-communication on this:
I’m aware that this is a hybrid of collaboration and appropriation. You tooted your verses in a thread, somewhat collaboratively, not knowing that they might be appropriated for something out of your control. Guilty.
(1/2)
@MarkBrigham @stevendbrewer @NaraMoore
I was going to commend you for gathering our somewhat scattered posts and arranging them. IMHO it isn't appropriation, but rather the curation of our collaborative output.
@extraspecialbitter @NaraMoore @stevendbrewer
Thanks all three of you for your comments. I was hoping it would be received in a collaborative spirit. Curating & assembling, rather than stealing. Peace