#WritersCoffeeClub Do you ever sacrifice blunt clarity for prose that flows well?

I spent 20 yrs in retail sales. I have a completely different voice when I'm selling and that carries over into my writing. It's more than just proper grammar. Prose that flows is a focus when I write. I sometimes will rewrite a sentence or paragraph several times before I can move on to the next one. It has to sound right in my head, or it isn't right at all.