How come most celebs/influencers go broke with in a short amount of time earning a couple million? Why not invest in local stores or offer money for a percentage of said store why not perpetualy money

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How come most celebs/influencers go broke with in a short amount of time earning a couple million? Why not invest in local stores or offer money for a percentage of said store why not perpetualy money - Lemmy.World

Lemmy

Perhaps we need to work on writing one sentence clause, putting the phone down, and then finishing it once the brain recharges? Every post OP has a stroke about half way through.

In answer to question: because people do not do well with sudden increase in net worth and quickly adjust to a higher lifestyle than they can afford. Why don’t they invest in a local store? Because the rate of local small business failure is abysmally high. That’s why banks exist - at the most simple, you lend them money, and they lend it out, and pay you a bit of the profits they make. Hopefully they distribute the risk appropriately.

What is wrong with my writing?
It’s broken English with poor grammar. “Why not perpetually money” doesn’t even constitute a complete thought, let alone a complete sentence. Most ESL people I know with more than a few months of practice can express themselves in English better than that.
Well then don’t read it if you don’t like it or comment sorry im not a Tik Tocker generation to dumb down so for the insta minute mindset.
Dumb down? There is nothing to dumb down, it’s just that the build up of your sentences makes them hard to read.
Well you keep going posting about it. You took time out of your day to post something negative about another person. Kind of seems like that much effort you must love me and my writing.
It’s not a personal attack, we’re confused because you didn’t finish the sentence.

Well you can take it that way and double down.

Or you could look at the criticism and think to yourself “maybe they have a point, maybe I should slow down and make my text readable before posting an unreadable mess”.