Show threadTrixter of the Moon CouncilFeb 22
(The new playlist would be entirely Hozier.)
Show threadTrixter of the Moon CouncilFeb 22

(Actually it would just be this song, which came out over a decade after I started working on it, on repeat:)

https://youtu.be/-32-6FqGW2E

Hozier and Bear McCreary - Blood Upon the Snow (from God of War Ragnarök) - Lyric Video

YouTube
Show threadTrixter of the Moon CouncilFeb 22

When I try editing or even rereading my own fiction writing, I run into a problem where I'm not so much reading the words as I am letting the words trigger the memory of the story as it existed in my head. Also because of this I tend to speed-read because I know what's going on, I know what happens, I'm just trying to savor the meaty bits, but that makes it very hard for me to tell if something is paced well or not.

I'm going to work on that as I go back over this novel one more time. I'm tempted to compile it into an epub or PDF to see if that helps, but if I don't at least let myself do line-edits I'll go mad.

Maybe sometime soon I'll toss the first chapter out here in case anybody wants to see what I'm on about.

#AmWriting #AmWritingFantasy

Show threadTrixter of the Moon CouncilFeb 23

I am *struggling* against the urge to use this novel project as an excuse to buy that wee e-reader Aftermath just had a post about.

I want it so much but I am so broke.

Show threadTrixter of the Moon CouncilFeb 23
Gonna start describing my novel as “Hawkwind meets Wardruna”.
Show threadTrixter of the Moon CouncilFeb 23

(Look at it tho, it’s so neat)

https://aftermath.site/xteink-x4-cheap-hackable-ereader-crosspoint-review/

The Xteink X4 Is The Cheap, Hackable eReader That's Just Enough

It has no touchscreen, no light, and it's under-powered. But the Xteink X4 has a devoted community that wants to make it sing.

Aftermath
Show threadTrixter of the Moon CouncilFeb 23
Making sure I have enough good queer representation in this story to allow for one (1) Evil Gay
Show threadTrixter of the Moon CouncilFeb 24
Giving theme songs to my supporting cast but I'm stuck on one because his song would be, like, something from Darius Rucker's country phase or some shit.
Show threadTrixter of the Moon CouncilFeb 25

All right, any of my buddy-pals here interested in reading my first chapter? I’m open to feedback but mostly I need encouragement and accountability at this point. Also I will warn that this is dark fantasy and not exactly cozy.

I have the whole thing written, btw, but I’m doing one last round of revisions.

Show threadTrixter of the Moon CouncilFeb 25
I have reached the stage where I am annoyed at anything I need to do that’s not writing which is unfortunate because I have a job.
Show threadTrixter of the Moon CouncilFeb 26
My actual goal with finally putting this novel out into the world is so I can secretly post my non-canon sexy parts as fanfic.
Show threadTrixter of the Moon CouncilFeb 27

Writers will literally be like “look at my favorite blorbo, he is so perfect and I love him,” and it’s a damp wizard with depression

(I’m writers)

Show threadTrixter of the Moon CouncilMar 1
The struggle of writing a scene with a character who you know would be inappropriately horny
Show threadTrixter of the Moon CouncilMar 1
The difference in vibes between how I talk about my writing and the story itself is pretty significant ngl
Show threadTrixter of the Moon CouncilMar 1
There's a lot in this novel that's really good at this stage, but I need to put some more work into the villain arc, which is basically "men will literally join a necromancy cult instead of going to therapy".
Show threadTrixter of the Moon CouncilMar 1
This book isn't fanfic-with-the-numbers-filed-off but you can *definitely* tell which WoW expansion was my favorite.
Show threadTrixter of the Moon CouncilMar 4
Back in '00 or so I read an ebay listing for a Gundam Wing hentai doujinshi about Wufei getting sexually assaulted while in prison that referred to him as "grumpy little Wu-chan" and that's the energy I bring to talking about the emotional harm that comes to my characters in my writing.
Show threadTrixter of the Moon CouncilMar 4
I'm not writing romantasy, I'm writing fantasy in which people fall in love and it makes things so much worse for everyone involved.
Show threadTrixter of the Moon CouncilMar 4
There was a point very early on when I was thinking of telling the story that ended up as my novel as a 16-bit Final Fantasy-style game in RPGMaker, and that's not *consciously* why it ends up with a balanced 4-member main party for a chunk of the book, but I can't account for my subconscious.
Show threadTrixter of the Moon CouncilMar 4
I think I’ve accidentally recreated Bucky Barnes from first principles.
Show threadTrixter of the Moon CouncilMar 5
I'm gonna have to ask my characters to stop being horny for like five minutes.
Show threadTrixter of the Moon CouncilMar 5
Current Writing Status: *playlisting intensifies*
Show threadTrixter of the Moon CouncilMar 6
I guess I’m at the “Oh shit how it is so late” stage of Writer Brain.
Show threadTrixter of the Moon CouncilMar 8

No LLM could come up with the depravity of the chapter I'm working on.

(It's mostly not even that bad but the bit that gets real bad gets *real bad*.)

Show threadTrixter of the Moon CouncilMar 9
I feel like I’ve oversold the quantity of sex in my novel but I hope to make up for it with quality.
Show threadTrixter of the Moon CouncilMar 16
Honestly it’s kind of amazing how little my novel owes to any Transformers fiction considering that’s My Thing, but there is a slight hint of mnemosurgery, and also a reference to a completely unhinged alt.toys.transformers post circa Beast Wars.
Show threadTrixter of the Moon Council5d ago
This novel I’m working on is aesthetically influenced by all the Scourge stuff in Warcraft/The North stuff in GoT/Skyrim, narratively and characterly influenced a lot by Michael Moorcock, and okay, I’ll admit the main character is prone to melodramatic inner monologues that are very Simon Furman.
Show threadTrixter of the Moon Council4d ago
I just like ice zombies, I don’t care if they shouldn’t work, they’re magic
Show threadTrixter of the Moon Council4d ago
This novel is really just a cautionary tale about goth boyfriends.
Show threadTrixter of the Moon Council4d ago
I have vague memories of a post from maybe Tumblr where some fanfic writer was like, "I had a really rough night but the good news is I can now properly write about what it feels like to get shot" and that's basically how my magic system works.
Show threadTrixter of the Moon Council3d ago
I have reached the first scene in this novel that needs to be completely scrapped and rewritten from the ground up and I am pleased to report that I am still capable of producing new words on the page.
Show threadTrixter of the Moon Council3d ago
The old version has to be tossed due to being too horny.
Show threadTrixter of the Moon Council2d ago
I can confirm that my stove is still hot and I am indeed still cooking.
Show threadTrixter of the Moon Council2d ago
This is just a Extremely Inappropriate Flirting: The Novel
Show threadTrixter of the Moon Council1d ago
I actually just don’t know how much sex is appropriate to have in a non-sex-focused novel these days
Show threadTrip23h ago
@trixter There's no inbetween. Either a chaste kiss and hand holding between a boy and a girl, or full on pansexual fukkin'. Don't quote me on that, but I think it's a major publishing rule probably.
Show threadTrixter of the Moon Council23h ago
@triphazard Hrm, I seem to be well on the way to the latter, does this mean it has to count as “romance”? 🤔
Show threadTrixter of the Moon Council23h ago
@triphazard It does feel like in the last 10 years or so it’s been decided that the sex goes in the Sex Books and only in the Sex Books.
Show threadTrip23h ago
@trixter Yes, I think it has to do with all the excessive Thinking About The Children people are doing these days. Everything must be strictly sequestered lest a child's eyes explode or they be led to sin or... whatever it is.
Show threadTrixter of the Moon Council22h ago
@triphazard I do wonder if it’s related to the whole weird Tumblr purity culture thing.
Show threadMeadhbh Dhommnail
The tumblr purity culture grew out of larger things but also yes.
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