@Christiee Have you seen this?
If we're friends, you have a sense of humour. If you're reading this, you're a reader. I’ve put this story online, free, gratis and for nothing, it's a twelve minute read. If you like it, maybe you’ll be curious enough to risk 99p for one of my short story collections. Maybe you’ll be smart enough to save some money by buying a compilation. Maybe you’ll be brave enough to buy my novel. Whatever happens, I hope you enjoy ‘Vincent’. http://aarondavid.co.uk/Vincent.html
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@AaronDavid There is one description and goes into diagloue. I would add more to the story. For instance, When I am doing a story, sometimes add history at the beginning or describe to the reader where we are at, how we got there, and behavior. I am old school too in many ways but everyone does write different. Keep it up you can do it.
@Christiee I keep my short stories short. I've been doing it for nearly thirty years 🙂 A dozen books on Amazon. There is a novel if you prefer committing
@AaronDavid I am working for the book platform but never done a short story.
@Christiee I did the novel first, then moved on to short stories. The novel took ten years to write. TBF they were our 'baby years'