"Nervously, Wang Yue wiped his sweaty pants on his palms."

Are you sure about that, past-Sophia?  Seems kinda mixed-up. #SophiaEdits #LingYueMoving

It's been a while since I was so lost in a fic. I missed it, even though it sometimes feels a bit lonely, too.

Buuuuut! I'll upload chapter 7 tonight, so maybe I can talk about it to some people once they've read it  

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It's "lets overthink everything about this fic"-day  

Are my chapters too long?! But it's so difficult to cut them into two...

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"Ling Yazhi was everyone while avoiding everyone's gaze."

Ling Yazhi was what, past-Sophia?!  
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The scene at the beginning of ch 16 needs so much editing that I skipped it  

let that be future Sophia's problem while I edit the other scenes of this chapter  
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I wrote "hair fryer" instead of "hair dryer" XD

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chapter 16 is edited. It went from 4,9k to 7,5k words  I really slacked off while writing the last chapters...

4 more to go!
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past-Sophia was really creative when it comes to chapter titles:

15: look for flat
16: look at flat
17: flat and evening

   
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Still overthinking #LingYueMoving chapter 12  

Maybe I'll just upload my mobage fic instead today.

First half of chapter 17 is edited!  

... meanwhile, chapter 12 can just rot away in my AO3 drafts until my brain decides to post it.

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These suggestions are so random sometimes...

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Don't you love it when blankets just magically teleport from one spot to the next in the first draft of your chapter.  

But nothing will ever be as bad as Ling Rui's pants in "Choose your LingYue smut"  

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Chapter 17 is edited!!  Only three more to go! I'll be sad when this fic is done — because I love it and because I don't have any jzeu fics left to work at afterwards  

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Tried to edit chapter 18, felt overwhelmed, and gave up.  

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I
MIGHT
HAVE
LOCATED
THE
PROBLEM
OF
CHAPTER 18  

Now I just have to fix it!! #SophiaEdits #LingYueMoving

Yes. Yes, problem located, problem in the process of being fixed.  

This was caused by writing the first draft while thinking "I guess people would prefer it if—" SCREW IT. I don't prefer it, so I won't keep it.  

Now I'm rewriting half the chapter until I like it.  

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Chapter 18 has been rewritten and edited  it's doooone   
10,7k words now instead of 6k  

but it's so much better now
seriously

only two more chapters left to edit now!
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Haven't done #WIPWednesday in forever, but since I struggled so much with chapter 18, let me share a short part of it (not beta-read yet)  #LingYueMoving

(nsfw-ish)

I read through ch19 today. Gotta rewrite one scene, but apart from that there's not much to edit. I thought there was one more scene to rewrite, but apparently past-Sophia already took care of that  

And my beta-reader finished ch16 this week! Gonna upload it tonight or tomorrow (still gotta reread it one more time)

#SophiaEdits #LingYueMoving (20 chapters in total)

There's this character called Zhang Yan and my fingers keep typing Zhang Min all the time  

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