My goal is to finish editing chapter 2 today!  

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gdoc wants to change "Oh my god, Yue'er!" into "Oh my god, You're!" ... that's a new one.

It also wants to change "Yue'er, I—" into "E'er, I—" ... this is wild. #SophiaEdits #LingYueMoving

It's totally normal to tear up while editing your fic, right?  

You made Wang Yue suffer too much, past-Sophia.  
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"When they finally arrived, Wang Yue almost ran into the bicycle leaning against the white and green white."

The white and green white.
Magical, past-Sophia. Truly magical.
(it was supposed to be "the white and green wall" I guess)
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Edited chapter 4!

first draft: 5,5k words
after editing: 8,7k words

uh-huh, sure  
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"Yeah." Wang Yue turned on the faucet and held his right head under the cold water.

...

Ah, yes. Wang Yue with his two heads and one hand.  #SophiaEdits #LingYueMoving

I'm really struggling to edit chapter 5 for some reason. I've gotta change so much because of how the following chapters turned out... ugh.

Chapter 2 will be out next week. Not yet sure when exactly. #SophiaEdits #LingYueMoving

First rough edit is done. The chapter is better now, but it's still not good enough.  

I've gotta try and fix this another day. Step by step. #SophiaEdits #LingYueMoving

I just read chapter 6, and it already feels 95% edited XD well done, past-Sophia. It's so nice compared to ch 5.

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I love chapter 10    #LingYueMoving

and rereading everything was a good idea. So many things don't add up. Gotta fix that #SophiaEdits

"So Wang Yue let it all out — the joy and the pain, the hope and the fear, the (???) and the (???)."

Wow, past-Sophia. Thanks for that incomplete sentence  
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Finished rereading the whole fic and took notes about everything that I need to add.  

Now I've really gotta get back to properly editing everything ... tomorrow  
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My perfectionism is getting the better of me. I even changed parts of chapter 3 today, even though my beta-reader had already read that chapter...

and I, once again, changed sth in chapter 5. Ling Yunzhi is giving me trouble, but it should be okay now. #LingYueMoving #SophiaEdits

I wrote "landland" instead of "landlord" 🤣

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Editing a really important scene in chapter 10 and struggling with Ling Rui's words. Usually, dialogues are my strong point  
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just Sophia things: overthinking one sentence of a 125k words fic 

I always struggle so much when I'm editing long chapters... I'm already trying to focus on one scene after another, but still.

Or maybe it's because I'm struggling with editing in general, and it just shows more when I have longer fics/chapters

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Finally figured out what Ling Rui needs to say in ch 10 and made myself cry. It's so simple, but it's exactly what Wang Yue needs to hear.

Also, I'm too lost in this fic and this ship again, feeling alone with all my feels without any emotional outlet.  
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"Nervously, Wang Yue wiped his sweaty pants on his palms."

Are you sure about that, past-Sophia?  Seems kinda mixed-up. #SophiaEdits #LingYueMoving