New #logline for my #pilot Fill Count. What do you think?

In a desperate bid for one last shot at baseball glory, an aging slugger teams up with a vampire whose allegiance to his own kind is threatened, as they both risk everything to boost the slugger's performance on the field

@cam "Risk everything" is kind of vague.
@Lironah damn! Forcing me to articulate what they are risking in a short few words is helping already!