Wet Prayer (A Tanka Poem)

Author’s Note: I have written haiku for many years. Heiwa Haiku has often been a spiritual practice for me. Recently I discovered tanka, another form of Japanese poetry, which, put simply, is haiku plus two additional lines. Haiku is generally written as three lines of 5-7-5 syllables respectively. Tanka uses the same format at the beginning and then adds two additional lines of 7 syllables each. The following is my first attempt at tanka. I am looking forward to further exploration and sharing of tanka poetry.

The morning is gray,
a soft rain is falling down.
I walk with head bowed,
watching the mist of my breath,
listening to the wet prayer. #autumnLeaf #breath #ContemplativePoetry #creationSpirituality #Haiku #JapanesePoetry #Mindfulness #mist #morningRain #naturePoetry #peace #Poetry #Prayer #Rain #sacredOrdinary #silence #SlowMover #SpiritualReflection #Stream #tanka #walkingMeditation #wetPrayer
Live music is taking a huge hit in Australia just now, I really hope things improve. I also hope great #Aussie bands like Bad//Dreems survive the closure of festivals and live venues.
#MorningRain
#LiveMusic
#AlternativeMusic
#RocknRoll
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=1uj76W1Q7qI
BAD//DREEMS - MORNING RAIN (OFFICIAL VIDEO)

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