I'm not sure if my criticism of someone's toki pona is welcome i only did it once but that felt bad i propose this: please put "o pona e toki pona mi" somewhere in your profile if you want criticism, otherwise put "o pona ala e toki pona mi"
mi sona ala e ni sina ale li wile ala wile e ponaa tan toki sina? mi pona e toki pi jan ante, mi pilin ike, mi sona ala e tan sina wile e ni: jan ante li pona e toki pona sina la, o toki e ni lon lipu jan sina
Temili