First, thanks for reading it! Yeah, it’s not a full volume (yet). I wanted to get a bit of feedback because I was hitting some doubts.

I’ll do an epub format in the future though, thanks for the feedback!

First, omg, thank you for reading the whole thing. And also for your honest critique.

From worst writing I have ever read to better than some published novels I had unpleastness of reading. Keep going as you will go places. Your skill has improved so much that it actually is a shame how bad the chapter 0 is.

Yes! Thank you. I feel like a lot of people are just “this is good” because they don’t want to be offensive. Honestly, your harsh criticism of the earlier chapters is just what I was looking for. It makes the later praise seem earned instead of just platitudes.

Plus, it gets my head out of my ass a bit and gives me a different perspective. If you feel the later chapters are better then they certainly are better. And if the early chapters are that bad, ouch but yes.

In your place I would probably start over, and take a look how to structure a plot with twists and turns. Come up with a hook and first sentence of a book. As they say, that is most important sentence.

This is actually great advice. And I think I see what I’m doing wrong. I have twists IN MY HEAD. But I think I’m too focused on setting up a big reveal later that I’m falling flat early on. Like, I have pages and pages of worldbuilding notes now and you really only start see that stuff in the latest chapter.

So yeah, thank you so much. I’ll give this a hard look, go back, and figure out how to set up the story better.

As they say, that is most important sentence.

And mine is “The universe is a prankster.” which even I admit is a bit cringe.

Neat! Sounds like I should definitely check those out.

I have not. I just started writing and now I’m here. I do eventually want to put it out there but haven’t thought that far ahead yet.

Maybe it’s the wrong approach but I thought I’d get more written before I posted anywhere. Plus so far I’ve been going back and making changes to earlier chapters so I’m not sure how that works with sites like you mentioned.

That’s what I’m using! Its so good!

How does it compare to the anime? I really like the anime even though it’s undoubtedly silly.

Yeah, that’s pretty much my thing too. And if they have a really short pen name, it really sticks. That’s how I remember people like Llo (Reincarnated as a Sword artist) and FUNA… names so short they’re easy to remember and skill that sticks out. The two is basically brain glue that makes it stick. Although I keep trying to call FUNA “YUNA” for some reason. /shrug

Hey Bookworms! Last week I once again read nothing, but I have good reason! You see, I’m writing my own LN. Please check it out, maybe? uwu

I swear I’ll get back to finishing Average Abilities isekai soon though.

Hey bookworms. Last week I read… absolutely nothing. Oops. Was spending time with the family and doing a few other things. I may or may not have a fun project in the works that I’ll share later though.