Laid down some flats/shadows to see how it's progressing.

Okay? Okay enough? It can be hard to tell at times. Anyways, #mastoart #creativetoots #critiqueme https://mastodon.social/media/QIdugsSrI_gMk7HqHDk

@TMWReviews watch out for the boob shape, that upper cup suggests heavy shoving. Do you flip your art much as you go?

@docky Not... As much as I should, it seems. Aaaaah, *crap* . Thanks for the heads up, Hayden, I can see the prob you're probably referring to (Both farthest boob going in a different "direction" to the nearest *and* nearest strap, possibly farthest collarbone too.)

Weeeeelll, *crap* >.<

@TMWReviews it has lots of good points but I've ran into trouble in the past when I didn't rough out the whole skeleton and form first. It's easy to get drawn into detail too early.