1/9
Your reader got it.

You didn't trust them.

So you explained it again.

🧵

9/9
The last paragraph is you not trusting your own work.

Cut it.

The full piece (including why the AI training loop that causes this is kind of fascinating):

https://articles.cowritewithai.com/p/done-doesnt-know-its-done https://mastodon.social/@nickquick/116772363979752410

Done Doesn't Know It's Done

Most pieces have a great ending. It's just not the last paragraph.

Co-Write with AI