RE: https://mastodon.social/@sundogplanets/116258677474446258

elon musk, he promised Mars,
but then washed out the very stars
with no stars in the sky to see,
who would care, who would believe?
who would dream of Mars,
beneath a sky without stars?

@llewelly - everybody now!!...singalong with Elon🎶He's a real nowhereman, sitting in his nowhereland, making all his nowwhere plans for, nobody🎶. From the new album SkyPie brought to you by the worldwide hit makers KetamineRocks

@llewelly proposed edit:

elon musk, he promised Mars,
but then washed out the very stars.
with no stars in the sky to see,
who would care? who would believe?
who would even dream of Mars,
beneath a sky that has no stars?

@scott @llewelly
Thank you! Those missing two syllables in the next to last line were really bothering me. A very good fix!

@llewelly

Failure upon failure by a "..witte boer.."