Yogthosspot the difference
Gabriel Pettier@yogthos i think they updated it assuming it's the same one, there is still a weird "exploded" as if it wasn't the whole point of an airstrike, but a mere accident, but at least perpetrator is identified in the subtitle, and "Carnage" is more appropriate indeed.
@tshirtman it's a bit better, but notice that it's still using passive voice, and fails to identify who is responsible
robin@yogthos @tshirtman This is not meaningfully better. Israel bombs kids, and they still can't even put "Israel" in the headline?
If this is the same article and they did edit it in response to this feedback, and this is what they came up with, that's almost worse. So cowardly.
@nottrobin @tshirtman it's basically this https://longreads.com/2017/04/12/the-elements-of-bureaucratic-style/
