Henrique Felix

@sdw hey. If you have time, it would be an honour if you could read my article about the latest Apple event and filming with an iPhone. I don't know if the text is good. It is my first time writing in English, so… I’d love your feedback.

https://artifact.news/posts/p/1522133987054218536?s=1121252317507539954

Nov 3, 2023 at 10:36pmIvory for iOS
Show threadsdwNov 3, 2023
@henriquefelix I think the general message you are bringing across is good, but it's a bit too technical, and because the English isn't perfect in places it makes it harder to follow.
Show threadHenrique FelixNov 4, 2023
@sdw thanks, man. 😊