I need to suggest an improvement to a piece of dialogue:
“I've got drones loading torpedoes into the bay as we speak.”
Should be
“I've got Exocomps loading torpedoes into the bay as we speak.’
No friggin’ DOTs
I need to suggest an improvement to a piece of dialogue:
“I've got drones loading torpedoes into the bay as we speak.”
Should be
“I've got Exocomps loading torpedoes into the bay as we speak.’
No friggin’ DOTs