Most of what this article is saying is old news to those of us who study academic publishing or scientific epistemology or whatever, but probably not to many working academics. So partly I think this just isn’t for you.
Further, though, I don’t think it’s useful to describe all academic discourse as “peer review”. Of course we need to read and respond to each other’s work.
But do we need the “review” as a central institution of academic publication? I’m not so sure.