Today’s poem is called ‘Slow Puncture’.

@brianbilston

Wonderful!

I'm a little slow so forgive me, but I've just realised that you have a few published anthologies, Mr Bilston!

As a family, we're on our traditional buying ban now on account of the forthcoming season. Wish lists still open though for another ten days.

I'm just off to update mine...

Yours, in hope, Kiz

P.S. Should Santa fail me, I'll be online around breakfast time!

@brianbilston I'm reminded of how spaces between words didn't exist in classical Rome, in part to make learning to read and write harder so that it would remain an elite skill. (Also, they read out loud, not quietly.)
@AndrewShields I did not know that!
@brianbilston I read about it in this book, "The History and Power of Writing", by Henri-Jean Martin. https://press.uchicago.edu/ucp/books/book/chicago/H/bo3684063.html
The History and Power of Writing

Cultural history on a grand scale, this immensely readable book—the summation of decades of study by one of the world’s great scholars of the book—is the story of writing from its very beginnings to its recent transformations through technology.Traversing four millennia, Martin offers a chronicle of writing as a cultural system, a means of communication, and a history of technologies. He shows how the written word originated, how it spread, and how it figured in the evolution of civilization. Using as his center the role of printing in making the written way of thinking dominant, Martin examines the interactions of individuals and cultures to produce new forms of "writing" in the many senses of authorship, language rendition, and script.Martin looks at how much the development of writing owed to practical necessity, and how much to religious and social systems of symbols. He describes the precursors to writing and reveals their place in early civilization as mnemonic devices in service of the spoken word. The tenacity of the oral tradition plays a surprisingly important part in this story, Martin notes, and even as late as the eighteenth century educated individuals were trained in classical rhetoric and preferred to rely on the arts of memory. Finally, Martin discusses the changes to writing wrought by the electronic revolution, offering invaluable insights into the influence these new technologies have had on children born into the computer age.

University of Chicago Press
@brianbilston Brian, this is genius! I absolutely loved it. Thank you for sharing your work 🥰
@brianbilston brilliant, love this (apart from that it makes me think of my mum with dementia, who had beautiful script & perfect spelling. Her illness has now rendered all the notes she makes unintelligible.

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Even though I knew it was coming, I still got dizzy looking for the close bracket to resolve line 14.

@hoctor Sorry about that - hope this helps)
@brianbilston I've just marked a student draft assignment that reads a bit like your final verse.

@brianbilston

Poem is lovely.

You might want to change the title.

That expression has a particular, and not-pretty meaning.

@brianbilston my Oxford comma friends on Mastodon will surely appreciate this!