Eugen RochkoMastodon's 2 Year Anniversary: A retrospective
https://blog.joinmastodon.org/2018/10/mastodons-2-year-anniversary/
Is my writing alright in this?
ktsukik 🏴☠️@Gargron yea, it's good. love the shot fired at the article bashing masto. conclusion hits hard, and sounds good
Famous Husband@Gargron it looks good to me!
Jeff Auriemma
Galápago555 ✅
개대박@Gargron it's pretty good, I'd just say it could use maybe a little fluff?
It's a listing of facts, which I think is fine, but reads a little dry 🤷♂️
It's seriously fine, I'm just looking for something that could be improved...
I learned about the shatner thing.... I like it ( ͡° ͜ʖ ͡°)
Terence Eden@Gargron it's good! And you introduced me to a new word - Fazit - so that was fun 😀
AM0💗🔪@Gargron
It's good the way it is. Maybe a bit techy. I would have put the last bit you have on there first and fluff it a little. I can send an example for you to work from if you want to change it but I'm still not even sure if you have me muted after jabbing you a couple times.
It's good the way it is. Maybe a bit techy. I would have put the last bit you have on there first and fluff it a little. I can send an example for you to work from if you want to change it but I'm still not even sure if you have me muted after jabbing you a couple times.
halcy 
@Gargron Fazit is not a common english word, probably, but a little flair is allowed and good