#EroticMusings W2 Craft:

In the #hypnokink / #hypnofic world, craft varies depending on how immersive you want the experience to be for the reader. Are they watching people trance each other or are they (the reader) getting tranced? Some stories (not mine) are written entirely in 2nd person as an induction for the reader.

I've been experimenting with different POV's and finding the right kind of humor to contrast the debatably darker themes.

Here's a fairly clean example from Boner Island.