@pookie not to be a perfectionist but this sentence “After all he seems intent on twisting and destroying one toy or characters from childhood after another and inflicting the consequences upon some poor settlement of innocent villagers.” I’d suggest modifying it to either “…one toy or character…” or preferably “…toys or characters…” just a mild suggestion, the rest seems unimproved by any more effort.

@pookie for the Atchung Cthulu mission 2 review "It is pitches the Allied Agents of the Britain’s" could be improved by dropping the ‘is’ or dropping it and is an going with ‘This module…’ other than that nothing else jumps out at me at first blush.