Karawynn Long 🦊✍🏻🏳️‍🌈😷♿Feb 22, 2023

#writers : What's the first sentence of your #WIP?

Here's mine, from the prologue to my (as-yet untitled) novel:

"The first time Noemi’s world fell apart, she was ten years old."

#wipWednesday

Show threadJeff, destroyer of whorls

@karawynn Really nice 1st line.

Here's mine:

'Caollyn rode at the front of the caravan, she and her animal picking their way carefully through an ancient forest that had died centuries before she'd been born.'

#wipWednesday #FirstLine

Feb 22, 2023 at 5:14pmWeb
Show threadKarawynn Long 🦊✍🏻🏳️‍🌈😷♿Feb 22, 2023
@trollbreath42 That's good! but I find myself wondering why the vagueness of 'animal'. Can you not name it?
Show threadJeff, destroyer of whorlsFeb 22, 2023

@karawynn

Well, I do name it later, so you're right, I can/should do it in that first line. Good idea. :)