I'm trying to improve my english soooo, here we are !

"Aelyn was crying.
Her wife wasn’t here: she had really disappeared.

Aelyn felt sick.
She wanted to kill and destroy.

Her gaze found her sword. It was shining, like a diamond under the bright moon.

She was going to find her wife and bring her back.

Whatever it takes."

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