#PennedPossibilities 1056 — Does your MC have any beliefs, and have they ever been challenged? What risks have they taken based on said beliefs?
Bolt believes in nothing. Nobody in her world believes in anything. Oops. Guess I'll have to explain.
The word belief doesn't exist in the language my MC speaks, nor does the concept exist in her society. The closest one can get to believing is becoming convinced or to have principles, but the semantic mechanism for locking in an idea that makes a meme irrefutable despite contradictory evidence, i.e. a belief, isn't conceptually possible with any workaround or mental convolution that wouldn't get a person tagged as mentally ill in her society. Attempts to control information and deceive fail eventually, and in some cases such practices are considered mind control—which is a capital offense. (This is addressed as a plot-point in Bolt's story.) As you can imagine, people become unconvinced all the time.
A lot of additional common words and concepts stem or derive from all the definitions and permutations—noun, verb, adjective, etc—of the word belief. Writing in the Reluctance Series is challenging. I can never imply belief, even peripherally or thru logic. It would be out of character. I have to pay attention to the multiple meanings of words all the time! I can't even use the words fortune or luck.
Strangely, Bolt's world doesn't seem all that alien. This isn't an exercise in wordplay. It's philosophy, an attempt to make the reader think about their own world and the distorted lens they view it through, as the prompt states, "have [their beliefs] ever been challenged?
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