I've decided that the accumulation of reviews of on-line serializations I've done for Mastodon now constitutes a sufficient body of work that it deserves its own web site. Also, posterity, just in case....
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“Undetected in the digital shadows behind the systemʼs firewalls, Westfield watched,” is a strange sentence, given the overlord is observing a physical meeting, but imbues the universe in which the story is unfolding with a mystical quality, as if it were infused by a strange technology of the future; it certainly plays hard with the emerging theme of the work: shadows. It will be interesting to see if this plays into the storyline.
2/2
Naleen's Shadow, chapter 3.
This chapter brings another dimension to the emerging plot, telling us straight that the protagonist is a double agent (or at least aspires to be one). The sense of danger he is putting himself in is, once again, palpable, latching the trigger on a potentially explosive tale.
I am engrossed.
@jxself
But the development of these main characters is thrilling, and I'm really looking forward to the adventures they are going to have!
4/4
@jxself This is a great start to a story, really setting a hard atmosphere and bigging-up a hard, dangerous, imposing man. I'm really looking forward to the next chapter.
Broken Spark