It's terrifying and anticlimactic all at the same time >:3
Stumbling out of bed half asleep and gulping them down barely opening up your eyes~
Imagine waiting in there all night getting more and more worked up and scared, and then the actual eating is like out nowhere, no ceremony, the fox isn't even paying that much attention~
David could get mad and shout at him to just go away, but he'd probably just gag him and enjoy it even more. He's got hours to live, and his friend is wasting his time >:3 Trivializing all of this in a way that robs him of even those last few hours >///<
huff >w<
And it's not just that it's casual, you've got that flash of annoyance from his friend. He's stuck for hours while Jose jerks off and needles and teases him and he can't even get left alone to process what's happening. Jose's distracting him from processing his own death >w<
asdfasdf sorry, don't mean to post a wall of text. Just that you've REALLY got this subject down, it's such a rare trope to see explored like this and you do it SO well <3
Just casual little barbs, but all the while his friend knows Jose is thinking about his death. That juxtoposition of the most terrifying moment of his life being treated like it's a joke. Looked directly in the eye, laughing about it and masturbating right in front of him like it's no big deal.
It's that combination of him being so cruel and objectifying, while being so casual and cheerful about it. He's not actively hurting his friend or ever breaking his composure beyond just needling and teasing. And his friend just has to watch him masturbate >///<
Jose not ignoring the prey, not being at all shy, not acting like they can't understand; zero qualms, just completely shamelessly enjoying it and teasing them >w< You so thoroughly nail the vibe for really cruel couple vore, it's so good.
hasdfwefasdhlkdsdfh >/////<
Having to sit there and watch him not only not help, but actively get off to fantasizing about how the night is going to end, enjoying how distressing it is..
God I could just go on and on... there are so many different flavors of that from unbelievably wholesome to horribly fucked up, and they're all SO GOOD.