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FIVE chapters left to edit in Book-5.

It’s crazy, but I began worldbuilding Carrdia and writing its first story simultaneously, including realizing I needed at least a preliminary map.

I grabbed a scrap sheet of paper, flipped it over, and went wild sketching. At least 85% of that map endured.

What would’ve happened to my stories, I wonder, if I’d sketched a different map?

Be everwell.

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Challenge #04834-M085: Making Light of the Matter

"Wraithvine, Wraithvine, where art thou?""I'm over here, playing the clown!""Wraithvine, Wraithvine, why be a fool?""Because laughter is another healing tool!"A children's skipping game of how Wraithvine saved a nation, by teaching the leaders of the warring factions how to have fun together and laugh. -- Anon GuestEvidently, Bucky had been to the library. Asking questions and finding out things. Kro could throttle the librarian's prentice/acolyte[1] for teaching him how to read.

"I learned fun stuff," he said. "Did ya know that nurs'ry rhymes are history?"

Kro attempted to focus on hir fiddly gearwork. Something was stuck in the middle of it... "Uh. Maybe? I think a few of them are political from... a Dragon's age ago."

"I learned that one's about
our town," announced Bucky. "It goes, Wraithvine, Wraithvine, where art thou?"

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The defeat of sorrow is joy... by internutter

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Challenge #04833-M084: A Lesson to Last

Kormwind, Dex to his friends, is being followed around by two youngsters, a human child and hir hellkin twin. When asked why they follow, the children ask to be taught to cook, taught to make things, taught to grow things, so they won't go hungry again. And the other children in the home won't go hungry anymore, either. -- Anon Guest[AN: This has to happen while he was off being an Adventurer and not a Prince]

Dex
had been viewing his crew's general fucking around in this village as an opportunity for downtime. Their artificer was in a complicated project and the rest of them were alternately helping her or waiting for the whole thing to be done. Meanwhile, they had small jobs. Most of the time.

Dex had spent most of his time in domesticity. Hunting, farming, cooking. Basic repairs and generalised maintenance of anything that needed it and caught his attention.

Then there were the kids. Two of them specifically. Hand in hand, Human and Hellkin. They had a scurrying way of moving around the villagers. Well. Avoiding the villagers. As Dex recalled, they did have adult supervision, but that was more in the form of a grandmother than anyone young enough to keep up with them. When she was in fine fettle, Grandma Oldyn was a force of nature.

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Taken personally... by internutter

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#WorldOfOntyre 24

7 chapters left to edit in Book-5!

I miss mapmaking and have been reviewing old ones. The original Tremjara map is from 2002 (created in Paint). Dimensions: 754 x 531 pixels.

The 2020 Tremjara map’s dimensions: 4800 x 3200 pixels.

If you zoom in on the old map it blurs immediately. That land maze in the NW? Scrapped in 2003. The color palette was severely limited.

Be everwell.

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Challenge #04832-M083: Last Will

The family fought bitterly over the box. It was beautiful, looking as though it were covered in gold and gems. They felt for certain whomever inherited it would find wealth within. The youngest two siblings asked only for the small wooden box that had been left out in the rain by the woodshed. The youngest two would never go hungry again. -- Fighting FitThe jocular saying goes, "Where there's a will, there's an angry relative." It could not be more true in well-to-do families. The arguments over money, property, and treasured little gewgaws can drag on long before the head of the family shows any sign of decline.

For the Kazimarov family, the chief argument was over Marilow's treasure box. Which appeared to be solid gold, locked, and kept in a pride of place. Future ownership of the treasure box had devolved into fistfights every Midwinterfeast party.

There were other boxes, other containers of varying merit. Others that were battled over by all of Marilow Kazimarov's family. Both biological and adopted. Marilow grumbled and told them to stop all the bickering, that the things they were fighting for were not worth what they thought they were worth. Only the youngest of Marilow's adoptees didn't fight. They were barely teens and more afraid of losing their only stable family than anything else.

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Respect their wishes... by internutter

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EIGHT chapters left to edit in Book-5!

I was the teen who never revised in school, though, in those days I had to rewrite papers by hand. I detested doing that, so I endured the red ink.

Now, I have to guard against over-editing, placing word efficiency ahead of readability. It’s the battle between my practical and creative sides.

It’s my practical side that plans and organizes.

Be everwell.

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Challenge #04831-M082: The Ultimate Choice

There are four crowns here. Gold and gem gives glory. Silver gives power and wealth. Red wrapped with gems, gold, and silver gives fame and influence. The little wooden crown, plain and unadorned, gives the power of kindness and the ability to heal, though you may never know fame or wealth. Be warned, three are paths to sorrow, one is a path to peace, choose wisely. -- Anon GuestThrough dangers untold and hardships unnumbered, the hero had fought their way to the final chamber in the Labyrinth of Four Crowns.

Those who sought it out in the first place did so with a great need for one of the four crowns. Some had a desperate need for fame, some glory, some needed wealth. None had sought the fourth crown.

Why would they? It's small, plain, and carved out of wood. It's not gold, nor covered in gems, nor the lustrous red of the crown for public allure. It's barely even polished. Yet it sits on a marble plinth beside the other three, with the Guardian watching over them and warning the heroes that wish to claim one.

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Challenge #04831-M082: The Ultimate Choice | PeakD

Helping others is important... by internutter

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NINE chapters left to edit in Book-5!

After, there’s a novella to edit. They’ll be published together after Book-4.

Why? The novella, Trellis House, serves as a bridge between Books 4 and 6. Confused yet?

On the timeline, Book-5 occurs simultaneously with Book-2, but would spoil Book-4 if published sooner. So, the series steps back, then moves ahead with the novella.

Be everwell.

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Challenge #04830-M081: Relative Barbarianism

DRIL: "issuing correction on a previous post of mine, regarding the terror group ISIL. you do not, under any circumstances, "gotta hand it to them" -- Deathshead419[AN: Obviously not using those organisations for the purposes of FICTION because you just don't mess with that]

You'd think the Elves had
learned from the first time they sparked hostility from nomadic people. They're slow to take in lessons from life, as they are slow to do many things. A cultural obsession with perfection will to that to a species. Unfortunately for the rest of Alfarell, the first lesson Elvenkind learned from the world was the arrogance of Dragons.

Having defeated Dragonkind enough to discourage them from attacking, they spread their influence as fast and as far as they could. Frequently disregarding the people who had been there first. With magic in their bones, the easily overpowered many, and began the Age of Elves.

Then they entered the Harukh'ai steppes.

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